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On 2016-07-25 19:23:58Show this Author OnlyDescending Order
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Hello everyone, this thread can be used to report errors in the translations of both story and skills, please use the following format, and provide the needed details if you want to report something:

Quest Name: (For example: Main Plot: The whereabouts of Konohamaru)
Screenshot: (a screenshot of the specific error)
Suggested Fix: (Optional, if you want to suggest to us a better translation before our mods get to it, feel free to do this here)

Let's make Naruto Online great together!

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On 2016-07-26 03:41:01Show this Author Only
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So in Arena there is this very Vague requirement ( Pic below )
I think this needs a proper translation. If I'm guessing right it should be " Achieve 1 Victory using A ninja with Earth style Mystery." or something like that. Also a 2nd pic that i'm sure i don't need to explain.
This post was last edited by Suzuken at 2016-7-26 04:45
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On 2016-07-26 16:25:20Show this Author Only
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I'm mainly going to propose some refinements to the Fire Protagonist's skill descriptions, if I mess up a detail then someone can feel free to let me know, I'm going for general readability and formatting.

Fire Style: Phoenix Fire Jutsu
Deals Ninjutsu damage and causes Ignition on 2 enemies. Ignition causes damage with each round and also negates healing for the duration of it's effect.

Fire Style: Dragon Flame Jutsu
Deals Ninjutsu damage to up to 7 enemies and causes High Float on 1 selected enemy. Clones, Puppets and Summons take extra damage from this attack. After 2 uses this attack requires 4 rounds to cool down.

Sealing Jutsu: Seal Of Red Lotus
Deals both Ninjutsu and Taijutsu damage to 1 selected enemy. Causes Immobile and Imprison , enemies under Imprison automatically take Ninjutsu damage when they consume Chakra for skills.

Taijutsu Attack
Attacks an enemy at the front with a chance of a 3 Hit combo. This attack also causes Low Float and Ignition.

Fire Style: Flame Jutsu (Really seems like it needs a better name to fit it's unusual look)
Attacks an enemy at the front with a chance of a High Combo. This attack cannot be evaded.

Feather Illusion Jutsu
Attacks an enemy at the front and causes Sleeping. This attack ignores the enemy's defense. (Is that right?)

Phoenix Fire: Chase
Triggered upon achieving a 10 hit combo, attacks 2 random enemies with Fire Damage.

Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu
Chases and attacks an enemy affected by High Float. Causes Ignition and Low Float.

Fire Style: Celestial Prison
Chases and attacks an enemy affected by Low Float and causes Repulse. Causes the enemy to take Ninjutsu damage when comsuming chakra, they cannot die from this effect.

Red Lotus Secret (This is the one I've been waiting for)
Increases both Ninjutsu and Attack of up to 3 Bloodline Limit users on your team for 5 rounds.

Genjutsu: Mirror Return
Reflects the first Debuff used against your team each round back at a random enemy on the opposite team. Also increases the damage enemies take from Ignition.

Fire Style: Enhancement (Is there any reason why this lists an exact number but Red Lotus Secret doesn't?)
Increases both Ninjutsu and Attack of 3 Fire Element characters on your team by 40% for 5 rounds

Oboro Clone Jutsu
Summons 1 Oboro Clone at the start of battle. Oboro Clone posesses Wind Resistance and uses Fire Style: Celestial Prison when attacking.

Bani Chakra
Removes Buffs and causes Ignition to 1 random enemy at the start of each round.

Death Mirage
Removes 1 Debuff from up to 2 random characters on your team at the start of each round. 10 Chakra is recovered for every character on your team hit by an attack.

Conclusion:
Well that's that, if any changes need to be made, for example I don't even know if that's how Death Mirage works, it's just how it reads, and it took some experimenting to understand what the hell Red Lotus Secret even does, I do know it affects bloodline characters but I don't even know if that's all it does given how crazy the description is.

If I'm being honest the game as a whole needs a bit of a localization revamp with consistant, clear and good terminology across the board in alot of areas.
This post was last edited by Kazuhira at 2016-7-26 18:38
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On 2016-07-29 18:43:30Show this Author Only
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Shizune's Poison Expert

Shouldn't the skill be Shizune does significantly increased damage to enemies under the effect of a debuff?(as in the chinese version)
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On 2016-07-29 21:01:50Show this Author Only
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It should be Indra Ambitionhttp://prntscr.com/bz213j


This post was last edited by Illusion God at 2016-7-29 21:03
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On 2016-08-03 06:19:48Show this Author Only
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Group Skills

Here's a couple bad translations I've come across.
http://i.imgur.com/Uwcru1U.png

Fix: Change Taininjutsu to Taijutsu


http://i.imgur.com/VTiIeaO.png

Fix: Change Unrecovered to Recovered
As evident in both of those snapshots life or health points are referred to as Stamina which is a completely different resource in the game.

Fix: Change Stamina to Life or HP
Conclusion: I strongly recommend to review the translations of the Group skills.

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On 2016-08-13 17:20:09Show this Author Only
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Quest Name: Hot Topics - Chase Missions

Screenshot: https://i.gyazo.com/e63ea4544ae4ef665b7fff54037ae45c.png

Suggested Fix: Translate this text in english,because when you are done with all chase ninjas this is shows up and i can't understand a thing...it's german language i think
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On 2016-08-19 23:39:05Show this Author Only
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So I was noticing in the Group Instance that on the solo one, you see Choza Akimichi in the lineup with Tsunade. But when you challenge the Team version, his name is Choji! It's a small thing, but it made me laugh, :L

Quest Name: True + Konoha Ninja Group Instance

Screenshot: I can get one later, when I challenge it today

Suggested Fix: Just change it to Choza, XD.
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