looking good!

would suggest that you use a higher level of stabilizer since your lines are still coming out pretty shaky. in digital, the key is to draw with quick, fast strokes for smoother lines. and use a stabilizer, and possibly a brush with pressure sensitivity

also the shoes lmao like i know you probably traced this but try to understand what's going on in the original picture then recreate them in your art, cos we know shes wearing shoes or something in the left picture, but you seem to have very awkward lines for her feet?

otherwise, nice work!