Not really anything worth an immediate fix but considering I do see grammar fixes on ninja I figured why not post about it?

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I outlined the 3 issues. Now I could be wrong and my eyes could just be imagining hinata not being flat chested, but im just spitballing here. I do believe she is a her not a him. But hey you never know....tho I do wonder where boruto came from then :P;P