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[ Fanfiction ] Fight Against Pein Chapter 9 {Rating T}

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On 2017-05-16 18:07:55Show this Author OnlyDescending Order
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In Scarlet's Perspective

Wh-where am I? What is this place?

I turned around and saw nothing but black. A bright light suddenly blew up in front of me and wherever I am gained color. The room showed a yoounger version of me, spewing out those fire* while a masked man was watching me. The masked person nodded in approval.

"Well done Scarlet. You're chakra reserves are pretty high for someone of your age. I'm proud."

My younger version smiled and hugged him.

"Thank you!"

The room rippled and showed me forming my fingers into something, while a person was in front of me, seemingly sleeping. I, think I remember that I was being trained in Genjutsu here. The man showed me how to place *most unbreakble illusions on anyone. The man kept praising me when the prisoners talked.

The room changed and showed me pretty *ed up. My body was littered head to toe with wounds. The masked man tried to run up to me but he was killed before he even reached me by a guy wearing a green vest. A person who wore the same vest berated the guy who killed the masked man and took me in.
I was taken to a place called Konoha and I placed in a hospital until all of my wounds healed up. The same person who saved me kept visiting me until I healed up. It wasn't until one of the nurses called her by her name. Kurenai Yuhi. After I healed up, I asked the nurse where could I find her and went to her home.

There, I thanked her, which she smiled at and ruffled my hair and left. But I didn't want to be lonely again. I tried to place a Genjutsu on her, but she sensed it and placed me in one. She broke me out of it and hugged me, saying she'll take me in as a surrogate brother.

Kurenai-neechan, that's what I called her after she adpoted me. Me and her trained ourselves in Genjutsu, playfully placing each other in one discreetly while we were home or not doing anything. And then the time came for me to go the Shinobi Academy so I can be registered. There I saw a cute girl, who was blushing at me as well.

Her name was Azure, and it somehow fit her. Then came a tall man who had orange hair. His name was Crimson and we all of a sudden became best friends. Next was Breeze and Midnight. Breeze carried that same aura Kurenai-neechan had. While Midnight...well, he was as filled with emotion as a brick wall at first before Breeze began beating it into him.

But then there's Naruto. He's a fun dude to hang with. Me and Crimson helped him with his pranks around the village, covering his tracks. A few years later, we finally became Genin but me and my friends weren't placed on a team. Instead we were special and we had to keep a close look over the other Rookies Teams, mostly Seven.

Least to say, it was fun. Besides encountering a nuke-nin, the Suna/Oto invasion, Sasuke betraying, and a lot of other stuff. I trained with Jiraiya-sama with my Ninjutsu and some Fuinjutsu. And after the training trip me, Naruto and Crimson had with Jiraiya-sama, I finally had the courage to reveal my feelings to Azure-chan.

I was the happiest guy on Konoha when she said yes. Me and her dated for a few weeks after we were promoted to Chuunin. Seems Tsunade-sama decided to mess with me and Crimson, but I found it strange that Naruto wasn't promoted.

After a few more mishaps like trying to search for Sasuke, encountering Itachi and a lot more with everything leading up to Pein's invasion. I smiled, because I know that I'm dying. I looked up and saw a bright light. I was about to reach for it, when I heard something, or someone.

"Scarlet-kun!"

I froze. Azure-chan!

Back to the Real World

Scarlet gasped and stared at the sky before he looked around until his sight fell on Azure.

"Hey there Azure-chan, I'm glad you're okay." Scarlet smiled and pulled Azure closer into a hug.

"Scarlet-kun!"

The Genjutsu Master of the group pulled back from the hug and stood up. "Come on. Let's help out Naruto."

Azure nodded and they ran to help out their friend. Tendo gritted his teeth and grabbed Naruto by the neck and prepared to Shinra Tensei the * out of him.

"You've annoyed me for the last time Kyuubi. Perish!"

"Sorry, but i'm not gonna let you!"

Tendo turned and saw an earth covered fist slam into his face, forcing him to drop Naruto. Scarlet and Azure gasped and saw a fully healed crimson.

"Crimson!"

Said Taijutsu expert smiled and waved at them, remembering what he just experienced earlier.

Crimson's Perspective Earlier

Woah. What's up with this place? Why is it so...cold? And dark? Well, I guess that doesn't matter as the darkness was replaced with various images of me as a young kid, hurting a lot fo people. A look of regret on my face.

Back then, my strength was too great. Every rock, every furniture, every person I tried to touch, I kept on hurting him. I don't know where I came from, I just remember being in an orphanage but the matron there didn't do anything to me. She just gave my daily food and left me alone. It wasn't until I was four years old that I learned of my super strength.

Every little touch I made to anyone inflicted a large pain upon them. Because of this, I was turned an outcast and was usually in the woods to be alone, to stop myself from hurting anyone, ever.

Weeks go by as I watched dozens of kids my age, playing with each other. either dodge ball, ninja, etc. I just watched in silence and jealousy, wanting to join in but can't because of my strength. It wasn't long until one of the kids saw me and offered me to join. I wanted to decline and just go away, but I could've been seen as a *, so I joined.

But that soon turned into a mishap as I accidentally broke one of the kids spine. I was horrified as I just stood there in shock. A Konoha shinobi quickly rushed to hospital, while another one asked who did it. Before the kids could point at me, I shouted that I did it. I cried and cried, guilt creeping up me. But the shinobi just patted my shoulder and made me follow him to somewhere.

I was placed in a nuclear bunker built to evcuate. According to the shinobi, I was about to be kicked out of the orphanage for destorying it, so I was offered one of the nuclear bunkes to live in, somewhere I couldn;t easily destroyed. Of course I accepted. But even still, I didn't have any friends. I continued watching kids in jealousy.

But it wasn't long until a strange man placed his hand on my shoulder. He called himself Maito Gai, a Taijutsu master of Konoha. he offered me to help control my strength. Of course I accepted. He and I trained and trained so I can control the strength of my punches, grips and kicks, until it was lessend that just cracked the things I touched, until it lessened even more where I can touch things normally. Maito Gai offiially became my guardian and I started the Academy.

First person I met there, Naruto. I recognized him from the orphanage. He was one of the people who didn't get hurt by me, but he was an outcast of the orphanage as well. He and I talked to each other and we became fast friends. Next up was Scarlet, he and I had a lot of similarities so we easily became best friends. Azure and Breeze, I treated them like the two little sisters I never had. But man, midnight was so uptight and emotionless as a brick wall.

A few years of me, Scarlet and Naruto pranking the entire village, we became official Genin for Konoha. We, and by that I meant me, Scarlet, Breeze, Azure and Midnight to keep a close eye over every rookie team in Konoha.

I had tons of fun, but I'm confused as to why I blanked out for a couple of weeks, right before the Chuunin Exams. Then came the invasion of Oto and Suna, I got pissed off that I lost control over my strenght's control that I demloished a lot of buildings, and killed a lot of the invaders.

But I still don't get why I allowed myself to not stop Sasuke when he left. When I arrived to help Naruto, I saw Sasuke walking away. I just stood there, watching Sasuke.

It wasn't until the training trip that I found out I was nothing more but a creation made to become the perfect super soldier by none other than Orochimaru. He activated a mental program in my mind that made me attack Scarlet, Naruto and Jiraiya. It was there that we discovered that I had the Mokuton. The actual Mokuton, just like the First.
Jiraiya didn't had any notes with to train me with the Mokuton and taught me what he barely knew about it. Two years and we came back to Konoha. A lot of crazy things happened, but I just can't believe it that the village is being invaded, with me not doing anything! Wait, oh that's right! Tendo is still alive!

I tried to move my body, but found I couldn't. That was until I felt soothe and calm, I noticed that a green glow covered me. That could only mean one thing.

"Azure-imouto!"

I woke up and saw Azure healing me, I quickly took out anything embedded in me and charged at Tendo, my fist covered in rocks.



This post was last edited by Zephyr of Troviator at 2017-5-16 18:41
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Back to the Real World and the present

Crimson saluted his friends, who hugged him in happiness. Crimson gently nudged them off, as Naruto looked at them in hostility. The orangenette frowned and formed his hand in the Ram sign, quickly trapping Naruto in an entangled root.

"Sorry about this buddy. But you're not yourself right now. Please try to stay calm."

The still Kyuubified Naruto roared at his face. Crimson frowned again but was struck to the side with a gravity force, sending him flying. Tendo appeared behind Azure and stabbed her, but she blew up in a shower of water, that covered up Tendo.

Scarlet smirked and quickly applied the Celestial Prison jutsu upon Tendo's neck and exhaled a large smoke of gun powder towards Tendo. The Genjutsu user formed the Tiger sign, and ignited the mark on Tendo, igniting the puppet corpse and the gunpowder smoke, causing the gunpowder to explode everything near it.

Scarlet used the Shunshin to get away, but was pulled back into the smoke but quickly sent flying into the air. Crimson recovered and formed the Ram sign again, trapping Tendo in an entanglement of roots. He formed another hand signs, covering himself in a rock armor and raced through Tendo, slamming his fist into Tendo's chest.

Azure dropped down and channeled chakra into her hand and uppercut Tendo so hard that the roots holding Tendo broke and sent him to the air. To their suprise a ball of chakra shot at Tendo, *ing up in his face.

The three loked and saw Naruto free from his entanglement and charged straight back at Tendo. Azure frowned and looked back, seeing Hinata's still body. Azure's eyes widened and ran towards her friend's body.

"Azure-chan, where are you going!?"

"I need to save Hinata! She might be in critical condition! Her state and ours is what caused Naruto to go into that state! If he sees Hinata alive, he might snap out of it! But I'm not sure about that, I'll take the risk!"

Azure continued on to Hinata's body. Scarlet and Crimson looked at each other and nodded. They charged through the destoryed terrain and weaved through ninjutsu after ninjutsus and launched it all Tendo.

The Deva Path merely sneered and deflected them all with Shinra Tensei. Naruto roared and spun himself again and shot to Tendo like a disk. Tendo clutched his stomach in pain. Naruto quickly clawed on Tendo's body before he grabbed him and tossed Tendo into the air.

Kyuubified Naruto charged up another Bijuudama and shot it at the former body of Yahiko. The Deva path once more deflected it back at Naruto, who just shrugged it off.

Tendo dropped down and lifted off multiple boulders from the ground again and prepared to launch the boulders but was interrupted.

"Senpo: Rasengan!"

"Drop dead!"

Breeze slammed the Rasengan on Tendo's chest, scratching his body, while Midnight sliced through his body and released a large of current of electrictiy coursing through him.

Crimson and Scarlet smirked, seeing their two other friends okay. Breeze and Midnight landed next to them. "Well, what's the current status?"

Scarlet pointed at the still Kyuubified Naruto preparing to charge another chakra ball attack. "Well, Naruto accessed to Kyuubi's chakra so bad that it covered him in Version 2 plus he's in 6-Tail mode as well." and he pointed at Azure who was healing Hinata. "Azure-chan's there trying to keep Hinata alive enough so she can recover."

Midnight nodded and prepare his blade. "Thanks for the update, now we need to keep Tendo busy!"

The other three nodded and charged.

Next is Midnight and Breeze. This is gonna be hard xD
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On 2017-05-16 20:23:35Show this Author Only
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What's with the double post? A Very good story! Can't wait for midnight's stone brick backstory!
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On 2017-05-16 21:32:48Show this Author Only
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  • TCOdelt On 2017-05-16 20:23:35
  • What's with the double post? A Very good story! Can't wait for midnight's stone brick backstory!
What do you mean by double post? Like I replied instead of it being with the main? If it's because of that, it couldn't fit so I had to separate it. If it's for posting yesterday, and now today, cuz I'm on a roll.

Midnight's backstory is that he's an orphan taken by Danzo. and blah blah blah. IT'll be explained on the enxt chapter.
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grabbed Naruto by the neck and prepared to Shinra Tensei the * out of him.

I was all into the story but this line just made me chuckle out. ;P Killed the mood but it was pretty funny to have a line like that out of nowhere.
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  • PoisonScrub On 2017-05-16 22:33:23
  • grabbed Naruto by the neck and prepared to Shinra Tensei the * out of him.

    I was all into the story but this line just made me chuckle out. ;P Killed the mood but it was pretty funny to have a line like that out of nowhere.
Hey, Tendo is getting annoyed. He weanted this end already, he can only do a couple of things, which are all gravity based,
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On 2017-05-17 05:06:16Show this Author Only
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  • Naked Snake On 2017-05-16 21:32:48
  • What do you mean by double post? Like I replied instead of it being with the main? If it's because of that, it couldn't fit so I had to separate it. If it's for posting yesterday, and now today, cuz I'm on a roll.

    Midnight's backstory is that he's an orphan taken by Danzo. and blah blah blah. IT'll be explained on the enxt chapter.
I too am interested in the 'brick wall' backstory XD
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  • MisakiFuuji On 2017-05-17 05:06:16
  • I too am interested in the 'brick wall' backstory XD
I keep calling him a brick wall because he' was kinda like how Sasuke bacjk as a Genin, or befor even he was a Genin. He was an emotionless wall that ignores you.
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  • Naked Snake On 2017-05-17 09:01:02
  • I keep calling him a brick wall because he' was kinda like how Sasuke bacjk as a Genin, or befor even he was a Genin. He was an emotionless wall that ignores you.
So true...
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