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[ Fanfiction ] Battle of the Powerhouse Merchants II

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On 2017-01-20 16:51:48Show this Author OnlyDescending Order
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This is the second part :D
"Tobi!" both of them yelling at him, "What?" he ask both of his master, "Which side are you on?" ask CHUOI. After a while, Tobi’s answer it with an epic answer. "Nope, I won't choose any side, bye!" and after he said that, Tobi disappearing from his masters. “Etto, Sakura-chan?” Nichrome ask her with some strange glance, Sakura turn to his master. “Yes, Nich-sensei?”

“Why did you dress like that?” -Nichrome

“These Sailor Uniform? Oh! I was finish my photograph session, the payment was decent for a month Nich-Sensei!” -Sakura

“Oh, I see..” -Nichrome

“Nich, why your face are turn red?” -Mei

“I do?” -Nichrome

“Yeah, You won’t leave me right?” -Mei

“Of course no! you know who I am better than..” -Nichrome

*interrupted by CHUOI* “Are you guys done? Gaara, Akatsuchi, hit them hard!” -CHUOI

While CHUOI steps back, Gaara start his ultimate attack, “Giant Sand Layered Burial!” and followed by Akatsuchi beside the fifth Kazekage, “Earth Style - Golem Jutsu!” and suddenly, Gaara’s sand had already on Nichrome’s foot. “Nich watch out!!” with some quick response, Mei rescue her dearest love from Gaara’s Giant Sand, while Sakura still stand on her feet fighting Akatsuchi’s Golem Jutsu who has an incredible strength. Then, the fifth Mizukage use her ultimate jutsu to counter Kazekage’s jutsu. “Vapor Style - Acid Explosion!” she yelled it out and force Gaara to stop his jutsu to create a giant sand beneath him and Akatsuchi who focusing the fight that Sakura gave to his Golem.

”Sakura-chan! I need you to heal Nich! I’m out of chakra right now”. Sakura immediately use his ultimate skill which is healing his teammates. “Poison Extraction Jutsu” Actually Nichrome was injured on his feet due to Gaara’s sand who trying to crush Nichrome’s feet. “It can’t be help. Katsuya, Attack!” Sakura summon her pet, and Katsuya immediately approach Akatsuchi’s Golem. “Just because you summon that, doesn’t mean you gonna turn the tide young lady” in a blink of eye, his Golem punch Sakura’s pet with only a single punch. But Akatsuchi didn’t realize that the purpose of summoning Katsuya was only a decoy to make Sakura had an ideal range to hit him. Sakura use her power to punch Akatsuchi’s body hard, “Shanaroo!!” and she * the fatty guy away for more than 50 meters.

“Oh My, if this battle continue until they use their mightiest jutsu, Konohagakure will be dead already” say someone who pass nearby with his Broadsword. CHUOI and Nichrome also had their fight without using their jutsu, only fist against fist. CHUOI land a punch on Nichrome’s stomach with his left hand, but in the same time CHUOI’s hand got lock by Nichrome and he land a kick on CHUOI’s head with his right leg.

Meanwhile Gaara and Mei also having a pretty balance match, the Kazekage attack Mei with his sand, but of course Mei wouldn’t silence and defend herself by put her Acid Explosion on Gaara’s sand. And the otherside, Sakura was still struggled against Akatsuchi’s Golem after she got the fatty guy got punch on his body.

“Well then, shall we start?” Ask someone who using his black suited and orange mask to his friend. Then, both of them focusing on their energy to transferred both side. “Kamui!”, suddenly Nichrome and CHUOI fight was stop because someone using Kamui to them. “CHUOI-sama?!” yelled Akatsuchi when his master couldn’t resist the Kamui. While Mei saved her precious man from getting transferred by Kamui, but it was too late, because the Kamui transferred both parties. And they disappear from Land of Fire Forest.

“How did you figure it out to use Kamui to transfer both side to their destination?” Kakashi ask his old friend while speculating why he called him at his office. “Don’t ask me why, ask the author-sama who..” and suddenly Tobi got his face punched by someone who seems very angry but he couldn’t see it through. “Aaww.. it hurts” yelled Tobi rubbing his face.

“So, CHUOI wants to get his building material in Kirigakure while Nichrome need to travel to Kumogakure for his supplies, am I right Obito?” ask the 6th Hokage to his old friend, “I’m 100% sure. But actually both parties want to go to Sunagakure first to booked their building material.” Tobi said that with confidence. “But Kakashi, why you were equipped yourself with that broadsword?” Ask Tobi, and Kakashi only give a glance at him. ”I’m in Beheading Sword mode.. so I c*e Kamui..”

Tobi couldn’t think it clearly why Kakashi should do Kamui in Beheading Sword mode, but in the end he could save his former village from another disaster. “Well then, see you later old pal.” Said Tobi, and Kakashi also said his word to his old teammate. “Take care, Obito.” And both of them vanished from the scene.

“What? I’m the only one here? Fine! I’ll walk from here.” Said CrownedKlown, with his eyes still can’t believe that his master was transferred away from him only with a single man, which is the Hokage himself and his old pal. “But, Nich-sensei didn’t tell me where he wanna go? Then, what should I do?”

-The End-
I'm sorry if there are so many mistake that i made, such as vocabulary, spelling, and many more. Nich-sensei and CHUOI-sama, sorry for not meeting your expectation. :'(
See you, and have a nice day! :)

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On 2017-01-20 18:46:15Show this Author Only
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Nice story. Kinda funny :)
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On 2017-01-20 19:02:15Show this Author Only
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good stuff !
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