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- Praybird On 2016-11-12 03:52:48
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I didn't know what was wrong at first, but I kept drafting it in paragraphs, then sentences, then words to figure out what it was.
Writing "group" and "could" and "beat" and "Crimson" was something the system could not accept, so I changed it to "group can beat Crimson". I'm not sure what's wrong with using could though.
The offenseive part is apprentally "0upcouldbeatcrimso"the 0 is, ofc, an o instead. Now, someone parse this and see what the heck is wrong with it plz...
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- Amadeu On 2016-11-13 10:41:43
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Hi, I was wondering if you will make a directory with li
nks to all parts of this story later? I've been enjoying reading it but have had some trouble finding all the parts in order.
If no "directory", having the link to first part in the front of every post and the li nk to the next part at the end would also work. In fact, I personally would prefer that(thou I have read all of them already).
Directory could grow bulky
I want it to grow bulky
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