Looks okey, just switch Asuma with 7 days Kakashi imo :P
Since he benefits from the lightning buffs + his clone do extra dmg.

But ofc in early level, that build isn't gonna work, since Kurama gonna 1shot you, without tank like Naruto, hell even Sai might be better, but bit more work to get, & i don't mean Exploding hell, but his normal attack.