the main problem with this setup are:
1) with hinata at move 1 and very front u are just giving ur opponent to control hinata in round 1 even if u use hinata mystery in round 1 --- reason: several ninja who have certain hit in their standard attack or a puppet can trigger the combo into hinata and if the combo include immobile or accupunture u can forget hinata completely

2) and this is the biggest issue... your main gun who will trigger the combo or create dps is not placed in a favorable position so it very high chance the opponent will be faster than you and destroy your combo in the round 2