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[ Fanfiction ] When the night gets breezy~ (MB x BD)

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Short story (might get continued)- inspired ages ago by one lovely fanart from Nekotani Alice- one of our beloved artists on this forum (since most of her works were posted before the changes on forum, resulting in deleting all of the pics- can't really link to her work but here's her profile https://forum-narutoen.oasgames.com/profile/39941422809155842 and also- I did add her art at the end of this work- PLEASE NOTICE THAT IT'S NOT MINE BUT HER!) And they are in time-skip version on it but in this fanfic- you have the younger ones~

Cheers luvs

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'Looking for a sparring partner?'


Midnight turned to the source of familiar voice breaking the silence filling up the Training Fields at this, quite late hour. He wasn't really happy for a intruder disturbing his focus during practice. but then he noticed who that was and his face lightened up a bit.


'Good evening, Breeze.' he said when girl smiled widely at him. 'Thank you but I'm quite busy.'


'Hmm... busy with what exactly? Some new jutsu? Or just sword fight? We can practice together, you know... It's more fun~'


'I'm not doing that for fun.' he replied coldly.


'Oof...' Breeze sighed. 'Of course you don't... By the way- I saw your fangirls on my way here~'


'Tch.' boy turned annoyed face away 'I don't care about them.'


'Pretty sure they will be here soon... oh, look... here they are...'


Midnight turned rapidly with a slight panic appearing in his eyes but there was only Breeze, giggling at him now.


'Just look at that, haha- I think you somehow do care.'


'NO! It's not like that...' he stared at her sly smile and sparkling eyes, then coughed and looked away. 'I'm just tired of them and wish they could leave me alone and stopped following everywhere.'


'Why won't you just tell them that you are not interested?'


'I did... few times.' Midnight replied with irritation written all over his face.


'Some boys would love such "adoration club", hahaha!' Breeze laughed then continued with a little mocking tone 'But, I know, I know... you are not like this, there are more important things.'


He didn't comment that, just turned back to her busy with hanging katana back on to his belt. Breeze smiled to herself, walking closer and observing him for a moment.


'But maybe there is someone who you do like? Hmmm Midnighty?' she tapped her chin with finger, tilting head a bit, while staring at his back.


Boy side glanced at her for a second.

'No.' he replied after a longer moment, trying to hide face in the collar of the cape. 'I think it's time to go home, so...' he froze when Breezy slowly wrapped arms around his chest, embracing him from behind. 'What are you... doing...'


'Hmmm, just checking if you are really so ice-cold or just acting this way.' she purred into his ear, puffing hot air on his pale skin.


'Stop, please.' he asked quietly, trying to remain calm and ignore the sweet scent of her perfumes filling air around them and that soft warmth on his back.


'Oh, come on~ It's just a hug~' she giggled again. 'We need to bond some more- we are in the same team after all.'


Midnight sighed, regretting not agreeing for sparring earlier- maybe he could avoid such situation with it...

It wasn't that he didn't like her- he just never enjoyed such close contact with anyone...


'Hmmm...' Breeze hummed to his ear again. 'I know that you could easily escape from my embrace and yet you are not really fighting it. It's not so bad after all, right?' she whispered, making him turn head with mouth opened a bit and a light shade of pink decorating his cheeks.


'N-no... it's... not...'


'Oh, you are so cute, Midnighty!' she laughed, hugging him tighter and kissed his cheek, when he started denying being anything near "cute".


She finally freed him from a hug and smiled brightly, observing his face.

'Those girls are right at one thing- you're very interesting boy-skilled, good looking and behaving whole heavens better than most of those monkeys running after me, hahaha!' she laughed with such a nice sound, making Midnight look at her in awe for a moment.


'I guess you can count me in to your fanclub.' she winked.


Midnight stared at her, with a mix of surprise and embarrassment painted all over his face, then turned away fast and coughed.

'It's late, time for me.' he said and cringed internally over how unnaturally high his voice sounded like. 'Good night, Breeze.'


'Nighty night~' she smiled, watching how fast he evacuated from Training Field. 'See you tomorrow, TsunTsun-chan.'


The End for now~~


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And here you have the piece that inspired this one- NOT MINE, author is Nekotani Alice and I really hope to see her works here again one day

And also- I will work on something with them too- but for now my focus stay at certain perv and his princess~ stay tuned ;)

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This post was last edited by Tiami on 2018-09-13 03:54:03.
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On 2018-09-13 02:20:21Show this Author Only
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Such a gr8 stuff to read *Nose Bleed* and awesome fan art ;)


Nekotani Alice has the skill




This post was last edited by ⛧Akuma⛧ on 2018-09-13 02:20:44.
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  • ⛧Akuma⛧ On 2018-09-13 02:20:21
  • Such a gr8 stuff to read *Nose Bleed* and awesome fan art ;)


    Nekotani Alice has the skill

Yep she had some amazing works- but didn't see her here in ages :C

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On 2018-09-13 02:32:29Show this Author Only
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After reading it:

just-kiss-her-already


You should "name" their monologues like:

Breezy: *Something*

Midnight: *Something*


I want more stories

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On 2018-09-13 03:09:25Show this Author Only
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@Akuma I dont like writing in that way :P

And about kiss- it may take some longer time for that ice of him to melt, so be patient~~ ;)

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On 2018-09-13 04:50:55Show this Author Only
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I hated 1 thing

The idea of part 2 is not ready

GJ BTW

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On 2018-09-13 04:59:36Show this Author Only
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  • Gentle Gaming On 2018-09-13 04:50:55
  • I hated 1 thing

    The idea of part 2 is not ready

    GJ BTW

Actually- the idea of part 2 is ready. Just "crafting" it might take a bit.

WTB some more free time xD

Thankies, glad you like it

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On 2018-09-13 19:53:47Show this Author Only
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I'm prepared to step down as the local fanfiction writer. You're really outclassing me, Tiami

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On 2018-09-13 20:09:24Show this Author Only
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  • Naked Snake On 2018-09-13 19:53:47
  • I'm prepared to step down as the local fanfiction writer. You're really outclassing me, Tiami

How about step up again and keep on writing :) But thank you, compliment from fellow writer is a honor.

And it's that- I always wanted to write, mostly because I love books and fanfictions. Although writing in English is not so easy for me- since it's not my first language. But it's so much fun that I will continue for sure

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On 2018-09-13 22:36:35Show this Author Only
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Whoever did this drawing, is such an artist. And wow, i love reading your fanfictions. It seems you have a big imagination and i hope you'll have time for more. But my ship is all mains together, x3 jk. For me , i love all ships between mains.

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On 2018-09-14 01:22:57Show this Author Only
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  • ehhhh -.- On 2018-09-13 22:36:35
  • Whoever did this drawing, is such an artist. And wow, i love reading your fanfictions. It seems you have a big imagination and i hope you'll have time for more. But my ship is all mains together, x3 jk. For me , i love all ships between mains.

All of our mains deserve more love And thank you- glad that you enjoy it :D

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On 2018-09-14 14:00:59Show this Author Only
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  • Tiami On 2018-09-13 20:09:24
  • How about step up again and keep on writing :) But thank you, compliment from fellow writer is a honor.

    And it's that- I always wanted to write, mostly because I love books and fanfictions. Although writing in English is not so easy for me- since it's not my first language. But it's so much fun that I will continue for sure

Hmmmm.


Maybe I should re-write Scarlet vs Sasuke :3

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On 2018-09-15 11:36:56Show this Author Only
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  • Just A Bro On 2018-09-15 11:36:56
  • MMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEe

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