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Takisada, Shiro
*FIRE MAIN - Scarlet Blaze*
*Specialty - Fire Style, Genjutsu, Family's Secret Technique user*
*AGE: 16 (Standart Outfit)

The Takisada clan belonged to the clans of the Hidden Leaf village. Generations ago they were send to the Land of Grass as warden squadron of Shinobi prison – The Blood prison. The unique secret technique of the Takisada clan, the Red Lotus Sealing, made them perfect for the job. The Sealing technique leaves the person free to roam the prison grounds, and if someone uses chakra, the seal burns his body with excruciating pain. That way the prisons were forced to not fight and instead learn to live without the need of ninjutsu. Soon after the star of the Shinobi war number * , the clan was forced to abandon their post and release the missin-nin prisoners for their own safety. Takisada retreated to the village, hoping to meet understanding. Unfortunately the village was almost empty as well, as most of the shinobi left to fight the enemy in that war.

Takisada took over the position as a civil guard force, defending the village from outside attack, combining the Red Lotus Technique with Fire Style Jutsu and Genjutsu, some of their specialty as well. After the return of the main force, the Takisada clan were welcomed back to the village, offering them the place of a Police force in Konoha, replacing the missing Uchiha clan. The clan rejoiced and blossom on their new position. Shiro is the son of the main family in the Takisada clan. With surprising easy he learned the family secret technique as well as basic ninjutsu and genjutsu before even leaving ninja academy. His natural talent was accompanied with the strategic and tactical genius, equal to those of Itachi Uchiha or Shikamaru Nara. But unfortunately, Shiro lacked motivation and ambition to use his talents.

That eventually changed when Shiro was given a scroll, biographic story of the First Hokage, Hashirama Senju. The unknown until now heroism and meaning behind being a Hokage and shinobi, gave Shiro the small confidence boost he needed to blossom into a fine genin and later – chunin., as a part of the infamous Team 13.




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On 2018-07-22 07:42:25Show All Posts
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Nikaido, Fumi

*WATER MAIN - Azure Fang*
*Specialty - Medical ninjutsu, Poison Expert, Water style Technique*
*AGE: 16 (Standart outfit)

Fumi is the kind of a person no one would expect to reach this far. Despite her sweet nature, her ambition and fearsome spirit make her formidable opponent. Inspired by her mother and the stories about the first female Hokage – Lady Tsunade, she trains and learns every possible aspect of the basic chakra control. The lack of chakra in her body makes her very calculative and careful fighter. First in the ninja academy as a theory student, Fumi finds herself forced to learn as much as she can to add more to her arsenal. Her ability to study makes her formidable poison expert. Some of her best poisons are utilized for use in her abilities and even for the benefit of her teammates. But power comes with a prize. Her poison was so potent, it infects one her teammates still in the academy. The horrible responsibility of the poison she invented force her to look at a new ninja way. Promising to “got her own slack”, Fumi works hard in the field of medical ninjutsu. With a new purpose as a defender and protector of the health and life of her comrades, Fumi even asks for a special short sword, she calls “Kiba” – The Fang. That weapon belonged to the father of the boy she poisoned. Her guilt doesn’t quench that easy, as she looks for new ways to improve herself on her path of becoming a famous shinobi. Perhaps that first step might be her own comrades. Team 13.




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On 2018-07-22 07:44:35Show All Posts
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Jin, Ken

*EARTH MAIN - Crimson Fist*
*Specialty - Earth Style Techique, Taijutsu,
Kekkei Genkai: Wood Style (Unlocked later in the story)*
*AGE: 16 (Standart outfit)

Ken Jin is one of the new members of the Hidden Leaf Village. His parents were free family of shinobi, left to travel and provide medical ninjutsu. When they took residence in the Hidden Leaf, they had to leave their son with his grandma for extended periods of time while they are on missions. Their kid grows rather large and strong for his age, even getting teased by the other kids for it. The grown ups on the other hand were skeptical and su*ious about the Jin family, often forcing their kids to separate from Ken. Eventually during a combat mission, Ken’s parents were slain, leaving the boy orphan with his grandparent. With a lot to prove and a lot to earn, the young Ken Jin joined the ninja academy. His strength and mass gave him formidable advantage in taijutsu, making him ideal for the rule of a team bruiser. Despite his new-found respect from his classmates and surprising prowess in physical combat, Ken mostly of all favorites the possibility of having friends. Able once more to feel as a group, making his friends into his family. Soon he is given opportunity to learn Ninjutsu. His parents were Water Style Users and the chakra tests show positive Water Style chakra in Ken’s body. But despite that, he is unable to perform a single jutsu. That alone gives Ken new way – the teaching of the Mighty Guy. The taijutsu training of the famous Hidden Leaf Blue Beast unlocks formidable potential in Ken. He trains like mad, turning himself into a formidable close-combat fighter. Later on, Ken is forced once more to learn Ninjutsu, just to be allowed in the chunin exams. Unable to perform water style techniques, Ken got an advice from his team member Shiro Takisada from Team 13 – to try simply a different type of style. With surprising ease, Ken is able to use the Earth Style, even inventing his own technique before most of the ninja in his generation – The Stone Fist Jutsu and its variations.

His Water and Earth combination of skills and chakra nature attracts the attention of many undesirable eyes. A secretive group within the ANBU Organization, called Leaf’s Shadow, believe in the possibility Ken to unlock the Blood Limit Wood style, lost for generations since the death of the First Hokage. How might that turn out….?




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On 2018-07-22 07:45:44Show All Posts
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Aragaki, Yui

*WIND MAIN - Breeze Dancer*
*Specialty - Wind Style, Sage Mode*
*AGE: 24* (Speed of Light Outfit)(Standart Outfit in flashbacks)

Yui is one of the most gorgeous kunoichi of her generation. She even utilizes it in her arsenal as a technique, inspired by the *y Jutsu of Naruto Uzumaki. In fact, most of her fighting style is inspired by Wind Style shinobi, famous throughout the Hidden Leaf’s history, like Naruto Uzumaki and Temari. Her formidable power and agility wins her the title of Queen among her classmates even in the academy. Her power can only be outshined by her straight-forwardness and unquenchable ambition. After the ninja academy, she is enrolled in a team with two boys – Hiroyuki Sanada and Raiden Asakura. Their team – Team 9 - under the lead of the Jonin Keito Yamazaki, was one of the most successful teams, even given missions class A and B, while still Genins. Their strength and the bond between them soon changed, when Yui realized she fall in love with Hiroyuki. But, alas, as it always happens, it doesn’t work out well. Their fame brought them into a conflict between the Hidden Mist and renegade ninja, who left the said village. Asked for help, Team Yamazaki enter as assistance to the Hidden Mist squats. The enemy used that to their advantage. The renegades threaten to reveal secrets of the Hidden Mist to the Leaf ninja, forcing the Mist ninja to turn against their support team. Keito sacrifices himself to let the genin to flee. Yui and the rest left as soon as they can, despite urge to save their Sensei. Unfortunately, even Yamazaki’s sacrifice wasn’t enough, as an assassination group cautch up the team and the genin are forced to fight off the much stronger and more experienced enemy team. Hiroyuki was lethally wounded and died on their way to the village, striking a formidable * to the girl, who never told him about her feelings.

Back in the village, Yui and Raiden take separate ways, unable to unite after the lost of Hiroyuki. Yui leaves the village to travel, looking for a new spark in her suddenly darkened life. She finds the answer in Ryuchi Cave, where she learns the Snake Sage mode. Through the wisdom of the ancient snakes, Yui finds a new spark, not to look in the present, but the future, keeping the warm memories, she needs to build that future. She returns to the village, becoming a jonin and starting work on teaching new generation of ninja for the Hidden Leaf – Shiro, Ken and Yumi, aka Team 13.




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On 2018-07-22 07:50:34Show All Posts
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Asakura, Raiden

*LIGHTNING MAIN - Midnight Blade*
*Specialty - Lightning Style Technique, Kendo (ancient japanese fencing technique)
*AGE 24 (Speed of Light Outfit)(Standart Outfit in flashbacks) (ANBU Outfit while among Leaf's Shadow members)

Raiden is born protégé. Calm and collected, he is a fierce warrior, who somehow skipped through childhood rather quickly. Not much is known about the Asakura Family, except that their descents are from the Land of Iron, the home of the samurai. As a student in the ninja academy, he shows excellent abilities and learns well, allowing him to graduate a year earlier and even join the chunin exam on his own. But he still needs a team, so he was forced to join the team of Keito Yamazaki. As a member of this team, Raiden realizes something he wasn’t able to until the infamous Bell Test. Team work and the joy and pride in fighting alongside friends. These ideals build formidable bond between him, his sensei and his teammates. Finally realizing that being the best is nothing, without being able to protect those you care about the most. Eventually it gets worse. After a failed mission, costing the life of their sensei, Keito, and Hiroyuki, their teammate, Yui and Raiden are thrown into a pit of despair. Unable to deal with the loss of her friend or something more, Yui leaves the village, leaving Raiden alone. Vulnerable and exposed, Raiden was forced to look for a way to quench his lust for vengeance. That throws him into the special assault group of the village – ANBU. As an ANBU agent, Raiden slowly builds the darkness inside himself, not knowing how much he lose in the process. Eventually, he was recruited in the shifty organization Leaf’s Shadow, turning him into political assassin and a spy in his own village. The news of the possibility of a genin by the name of Ken Jin to be an Wood style user, brings the boy to the attention of the Leaf’s Shadow. Their leader orders Raiden to spy Yui’s Team 13 and report future development. Will the memory of his old teammate and the bright hope of Team 13 awaken the cold heart of the ANBU agent…? Who knows?




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On 2018-07-25 22:17:13Show All Posts
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DISCLAIMER: Next few stories are rewrites/copies of the Naruto movies, adapted for the characters above.

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Adventure First: Shinobi clash in the Land of Snow

Any and all similarities to movies and characters are completely a word of fiction and PLAGIARISM. This story and few more will be retelling of the Naruto movies over the time, with twists and changes cording to the stories of the characters, which I already posted at the begining.

The story begins with a heroine previously unknown in the Naruto continuity: Princess Gale. Gale's nemesis, Mao, challenged her group with an army of undead soldiers. His dark intentions seemed to prevail; that is, until Princess Gale and her cohorts, Shishimaru, Brit, and Tsukuyaku, unleashed the power of the Seven-Colour Chakra upon him. They saved the day, and one of our heroes – Ken - watching from afar, couldn't have been more elated.

As it turned out, Ken was actually watching the scene in a movie, as was the rest of Team 13. However, the audience of the movie began to throw objects at the team for making so much noise whilst arguing with the cinema manager. As the team is forced to leave the theatre without being able to see the ending, suddenly the actress who played Princess Gale, Yukie Fujikaze passes by on horse, being chased by armoured men on horses as well. As Ken, Yumi and Shiro manage to easily defeat the attackers, it turns out that they were actually stuntmen disguised as bodyguards, led by Yukie's manager, Sandayu Asama. As Yui comes in to inform them of this misunderstanding, he reveals that he had sent them to watch it as preparation for their next mission: to * Yukie while the crew made the next movie in the Land of Snow. As it turned out, Yukie was actually the princess of the Land of Snow, Koyuki Kazahana. The land had been taken over by her uncle, Dotō Kazahana and his three-man-team of rogue ninja when she was a child. Dotō wanted Yukie's crystal necklace in order to unlock the Land of Snow's treasure, which Yukie's father, the daimyō had hidden before being assassinated. As many citizens doubted she had survived, apparently Yui was responsible for her rescue during the day of the revolt. Sandayū would eventually find her on stage one day and considered himself lucky to have become her manager. After the discussion, the director would decide that the filming would continue, intrigued by the idea of having a real princess play the princess in the movie.

Eventually, Dotō would arrive with his team and some ninja subordinates by train after melting the ice that covered the tracks to an old railway system. As Sandayū, who leads a group of 50 samurai, loyal to the old daymio, attempt to charge after them, the mortar-mounted compartments release huge waves of kunai massacring the entire brigade. Sandayū, clinging on to life passes away after telling Yukie not to cry for him. Suddenly, Dotō's blimp (Weeeird) manages to capture Yukie and flies away, but not before Kan manages to cling on with a kunai attached rope. As the two are taken to his mansion, Yui, Shiro and Yumi eventually regroup with them. After various battles between Team 13 and the rogue ninja, resulting in the death of all of the latter and Nadare, Dotō succeeded in obtaining Yukie's crystal necklace, only to discover that the "treasure" of the Land of Snow is a generator designed to melt the snow and thus bring Spring to the snow country. After a confrontation with Shiro and Ken, Dotō was then killed by Ken with his Stone Fist Jutsu in a manner reminiscent of Princess Gale’s defeat of Mao, involving "rainbow chakra". The multi-colored chakra is the first sign we got of Ken’s Wood Style Release. It is noticed by the spying all throught the movie in small scenes, on them Raiden Asakura, which he reports to his superiors in an end credit scene, because we are Marvel fans too.

With the rogue ninja all gone, Yukie decided to resume her position as the princess of the Land of Snow, which would eventually become the Land of Spring after the technology behind the generator was perfected. Despite being a princess, Yukie intended to continue her role as an actress. At the very end of the movie, Kan, who had desperately wanted an autograph from the actress, was given an envelope from Shiro afterwards, who received shocked looks from the other members of Team 13, including Ken himself. Inside the envelope was a signed photograph from Yukie. The picture was of a bandaged up (and apparently unconscious) Kan in the hospital, who was receiving a tender kiss on the cheek from the actress. At the end of the credits, the crew that had made the Princess Gale movie said cut, and all cheered in unison. Because fourth walls are for the not so brave.





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On 2018-07-26 04:24:30Show All Posts
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  • ⛧Akuma⛧ On 2018-07-25 22:19:11
  • I wanna know more about the wood element :(

Well, I hardly know a lot, but as much as I know about it is: It is a bloodlimit release, kekkei genkai. Those are usually locked within a certain clan or family. While most elemental chakra techniques are supposed to be bound to a certain type of chakra, a bloodlimit user is capable of using a style, combining two elements in one. The first Hokage, Hashirama Senju was able to release the Wood style, ability to grow and manipulate plant life, using his dual nature chakra - earth and water. Most bloodlimit users are using 2 or even 3 types of chakra into one element, so unique that it can't be taught to a student or copied with Sharingan.
Orochimaru tried using cells from the deceased Hashirama to make clones of him. Yamato is probably his only successful experiment. Earth main/Crimson Fist is, according to my scribles, naturally developing the Wood Style.




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Second Adventure: Stone of Power. True nature of strenght

Any and all similarities to movies and characters are completely a word of fiction and PLAGIARISM. This story and few more will be retelling of the Naruto movies over the time, with twists and changes cording to the stories of the characters, which I already posted at the begining.

A battle was taking place at night on a desolate seaside beach between Hidden Sand ninja and soldiers wearing bulky suits of armour. Despite their best efforts, the Sand ninja are slowly overwhelmed by the sheer strength of their mysterious opponents. The timely arrival of reinforcements, led by Elder Kankurō and Kazekage Shinki, turn the tide of battle, with Elder Kankurō slicing apart a suit of armour with his puppet, and Shinki dispatching a large number of enemies with his signature Sand Waterfall Imperial Funeral. However, when the Kazekage orders the Sand-nin to shine a flare at the retreating enemies, a large warship is revealed, with its own arsenal of heavy weapons, much to the Sand shinobi's shock and curiosity of its appearance. The ship then opens fire with its guns, and Shinki’s defenses barely manages to protect his comrades as its artillery shells relentlessly pounded the beach. Ken, Shiro and Yumi are on a mission to capture a lost pet ferret and deliver it to its village. Ken comically refers to the creature as a cat for the remainder of the movie. But while on their way to return the animal, they are attacked by a mysterious man clothed in knight armour. He too is accompanied by the strange armoured soldiers from before. The three fight him, but get separated when Ken, the knight and the pet ferret all fall off a cliff. Shiro and Yumi only realise afterward what has happened and immediately go to look for them. Before they can, what appears to be an earthquake stops them in their tracks until they realise that it isn't an earthquake at all, but the movement of a giant mechanical moving structure. Yumi and Shiro split up to search for Ken.

Ken wakes up to find himself bandaged, as well right next to an equally wounded unknown man. They have been taken in by a very peaceful caravan of nomads that own a number of foreign animals, including ostriches and rhino. An old man goes on to inform Ken that they are in fact the village that hired the leaf ninja to return their pet ferret, named Nerugui. The ferret also seems to have a great interest on the unknown man, much to the despair of the elder. While healing, the man seems to have a flashback dream that depicts what happened to him as a child. His home was invaded and destroyed while he hid, seemingly the only one alive. He is almost found, but in the last moment he is spared and manages to live. Kahiko and his granddaughter Emina goes onto explaining to Ken how their clan once originally had a country, but it was destroyed a very long time ago by some kind of disaster, and that Nerugui is proof of it. They also tell him how Nerugui is in fact older than the clan elder, having been looked after by the clan for generations. As Ken looks for an explanation from Temujin, the knight only asks Ken about his strange 'power,' that is actually his chakra. Temujin appears not to know what chakra is, even if he can wield a similar power. Temujin simply tells him that he is there 'to build a utopia,' then goes on to invite Ken to join him. The Earth Shinobi promptly refuses, only for the ostrich he is riding to run away on its own.

Still looking for an explanation from Temujin, Ken follows him as he sneaks away from the caravan. After risking his injuries to save one of the caravan's children from falling from a tree, Temujin claims that his debt has been 'repaid' and continues to leave.


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Meanwhile, Shiro infiltrates the mechanical structure and finds what appears to be a lab with children in capsules. They are overlooked by a pair of women (Kamira and Ranke) with similar armour to what Temujin had been wearing, whom operate a machine that makes the bulky soldiers from before. The two discuss the Gelel Stone, something that Shiro has never heard of. He is almost caught, but manages to flee at the last moment. Fortunately, the attention was brought away by sound made by the spying at the moment Raiden Asakura. It appears to be an act of defending the Leaf’s Shiro by the spy. Ken discovers that Temujin has gone missing and goes to head after him when Kahiko comes to him, saying how Nerugui has disappeared again. As his mission was to deliver the pet to the village the group was headed to, he still has to complete it. The clan elder even goes as far as saying he should have hired the Sand Ninja instead. Even though he returned the ferret to its owners, Ken still must go and find it again. Meanwhile Yumi comes across an abandoned campfire and finds the caravan's trail.

Ken goes on to find Temujin again, who has Nerugui with him. (He comically tells him to hand over the 'cat.') Temujin finally reveals his name, as they find themselves in front of the large vessel from before. They go inside, revealing the structure to be very advanced in technology and sort of like a European cathedral on the inside. There, Temujin introduces Ken to his master, Haido. Dressed in what appears to be bishop robes, Haido goes on into detail about their goals, and again extends the invitation to join them. Ken Jin claims that he can't join them because he's going to be Hokage, but offers to spread the peace that they wish for. Nerugui appears on Temujin's shoulder, instantly showing a dislike for Haido. Haido starts thinking when they mention a caravan. They move out when an overhead announcement tells them that the fleet that was sent to the Land of Wind has been annihilated. Temujin and Ken head on to find the ship that had attacked the Sand Ninja, beached with all kinds of metal parts in the sand. Once they investigate the vessel, Ken discovers Elder Kankurō among a room filled with unconscious children amongst all of the rubble. Elder Kankurō immediately attacks Temujin, explaining how the ship had been wiping out Land of Wind villages. Ken demands an explanation, but all Temujin can reply is 'Noble sacrifices for the greater good.' Before they battle, they are interrupted by the Kamira and Ranke, whom Elder Kankurō and Shinki take on. Kamira uses a kind of mind control that seems to be genjutsu. Meanwhile, Ranke transforms herself, causing her to have several gorilla-like traits, as well as large lightning attacks. After a hefty battle, Shinki manages to distinguish Ranke's lightning and kill her, but Kamira manages to flee by growing bat-like features, wings included. During the commotion, Ken is separated from Temujin.

The movie shifts to the caravan being attacked by one of Haido's followers known as Fugai. After destroying most of the wagons and killing most of the livestock, she questions Kahiko about where the Gelel stone is. Thankfully who should step in but Shiro and Yumi, who claim to have seen her flare. They already managed to take out the soldiers. Fugai goes on to take on wolf-like traits and manages to escape. Shikamaru questions the elder about the Gelel stones, but the he doesn't want to talk. They start to leave, saying that they need to find a friend. When Kahiko asks if their friend is Ken Jin, they find out that Ken was with him. The elder goes on to ask the two for help. Through a series of flashbacks, we discover how Temujin met Haido after his village was destroyed. We also discover that Temujin actually has a Gelel stone inside of him, causing his eyes to appear the red colour they are. After getting word that the caravan from before has information, Temujin returns to what is left of it only to be captured by Shiro’s genjutsu. Ken has managed to find Shiro and Yumi, and the three stay with the caravan people, who had managed to escape and are currently hiding in a cave. There, they question Temujin to find out what Haido wants with the Gelel stone. Kahiko claims that the stones only cause harm, but then Temujin reveals how he has a stone inside of him.

The elder goes on to question Temujin about a book and about their clan, confusing Temujin. He tells them that only members of the royal family of their clan could bind the stones with their bodies, Temujin being one of them. He then tells them that the royal family left and crossed the ocean, taking the Book of Gelel with them. Temujin hasn't come to a new land, in fact he has returned home. Kahiko tells them that they don't know of the stone's origin, but they do know it was a mineral that their clan was able to refine and use as they pleased. It was very powerful, so much that an entire civilisation was wiped out in a battle over it. Afterward the few remaining clan members sealed it away in attempt to keep it from happening again. The only reason they didn't destroy it was because the only ones who could were those of royal blood.


Determined after the tale, Temujin tells them that he only wants to achieve his dream of a utopia. He manages to escape (he was free the whole time) and kidnaps Kahiko to make him lead him to the Gelel mines. They don't know where the mines are, but Nerugui manages to lead them to it. Temujin and the elder find the ruins and journey deep into them to find the entrance to the mines.

The Leaf ninja try to save Kahiko, only for Haido and his entourage appear. Shiro Takisada tries to stop Haido to question him, only for Haido to claim he only wants peace, and he's going to create a utopia. Shiro ironically states that they are doing the exact opposite. Ken angrily asks him if he even cares about his fallen comrades, whom Haido only claims are 'noble sacrifices.' Temujin grimly agrees. After Ken Jin tells them that dreams without friends are nothing, the elder finally triggers a mechanism that seals him and Temujin into a passageway into the mines. Haido reveals that he possesses the Book of Gelel before smashing Naruto into the wall like it was nothing and follows them. Kamira and Fugai attack, but Shiro and Yumi hold them off to allow Ken to follow Haido. Temujin and Kahiko find themselves in the 'Chamber of Sealing' and find a picture that appears to be one of despair. The elder tries to reason with Temujin, but Temujin doesn't wish to hear it. Kahiko then reveals a knife.

Meanwhile, Kamira toys with Shiro as she flies around, he is unable to get a lock on her with his Celestia Chains. But then he suddenly spots Elder Kankurō on the far side of the ruins. As Fugai chases after Yumi, she is unable to lose her even after Yumi blinds her with a Poison Fog Wave technique. Finding a crystal structure that creates echoes, Yumi uses herself as bait so Fugai will howl and triggers the crystals to collapse on top of her. Shiro fills the whole area with lines with Fire Style Flames (most of them are fake just Illusion Techique) so Kamira cannot fly about. Just as Kamira thinks she knows what he has in store, Elder Kankurō suddenly launches one of his puppets to automatically trap and kill her. Here he reveals still using the Sasori Puppet formation. After wounding Temujin, the elder has his blood on a dagger that he tries to pierce a seal on the floor, only for the elder to interrupt. Just as Haido finds the mine's key, Nerugui tries to stop him. The ferret is killed by a barrier around him, a Gelel stone falling out of the ferret's mouth. Temujin stands in front of the elder as Haido is about to kill him, Temujin claiming there is no reason to kill him. Temujin suddenly has a bit of deja vu, just as Ken appears. Haido tells Temujin to kill the both of them, but Temujin has had enough and refuses. Haido then claims that he is useless, no different from his parents. Deja vu happens again, and Temujin finally realises that Haido was the one who murdered his parents.

Haido goes on to turn into his own kind of creature, then captures Temujin and extracts the Gelel stone from him. The elder begs Ken to stop Haido. The Hidden Leaf ninja encourages Temujin to get up as he fights, even going so far as to use new version of his original Stone Fist Jutsu – Super Stone Fist Jutsu - Fall. But Haido has managed to tap into the mine and heals all of his twisted limbs. Ken still wishes for Temujin to help him, and just as Haido goes to finish them, the fake soldiers go and protect them both. The souls of the children emerge as the soldiers are destroyed, and Temujin finally realises his wrongdoings.

Combining both Raw Wood style and the Galel stone, Temujin and Ken manage to to kill Haido. But in the process they accidentally destroy the key to the mine. The walls start to crumble around them as the mine spirals out of control. Shiro, Yumi and Elder Kankurō all manage to retrieve the children from the machines, only for the ruins to start collapsing. They cannot control it, but there is a way to destroy it. If Temujin puts his hand on the seal from before, he can summon a time/space continuum. Only royal blood can do it, and the one who does will end up sacrificing himself. Ken Jin tries to stop Temujin from doing it, for Temujin to knock him out. He says doing it is the only way to atone for what he's done. Temujin goes into the collapsing Galel to the seal and activates it. All is quiet as Shiro, Yumi, Elder Kankurō and Kazekage Shiki can only watch as everything in the void's way begins to be devoured. As Temujin waits for his fate, suddenly he finds himself floating as a line of fully developed Wood style roots have clutched onto him. Yumi almost goes into the void herself to see where Ken is, revealing her bond with him might be romantic. Only at the last moment a burst of the Gelel escapes and causing the land mass to start moving. When it finally stops, they find Kahiko, who claims that he feels even better than ever thanks to the Gelel. He is even joyously reunited with a still alive Nerugui. The wastelands have now turns into an oasis, as all the children awaken.

Temujin awakes, realising he's still alive with Ken still clutching his arm. They find picture from despair from before, and it wasn't one after all, in fact it was one of hope. Later they all gather at the ocean, where Temujin and the others all gather and prepare themselves to leave, back to the land that they came from. They are aware that it's one with lots of conflict, but Temujin wishes to help where he can. Temujin's eyes have now turned back to their original bright green. And much to the elder's disappointment again, Nerugui has chosen to go with them as well. As they leave, Ken stands on a cliff and shares a sign with Temujin, promising each other never to give up.

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Adventure Third: Crecent Moon Island arc

Any and all similarities to movies and characters are completely a word of fiction and PLAGIARISM. This story and few more will be retelling of the Naruto movies over the time, with twists and changes cording to the stories of the characters, which I already posted at the beginning.

Ken Jin, Shiro Takisada, Fumi Nikaido and their leader, Yui Aragaki, were assigned to a B-rank mission, to protect the prince of the Land of the Moon, Michiru, during his world trip; other *s had been hired, but had quit due to being treated poorly. The Land of the Moon is a very wealthy nation, so Michiru tended to buy whatever he wanted, and had a very materialistic world-view. His son, Hikaru Tsuki, also acted in much the same manner, which irritated Fumi most of the time. During the trip, the caravan stopped at a circus. When Hikaru took a liking to a rare sabre-toothed tiger, Chamū, which was featured there, Michiru ended up purchasing not only it, but the rest of the circus as well, placing it under the team's protection. Hikaru attempted to befriend the tiger, but found that it disliked humans. He lost interest in the circus, and, during a sea voyage, when a storm hit, he appeared unconcerned about the animals' well-being, causing Fumi to become disgusted at his lack of value for them. Upset by Fumi's view of him, Hikaru went out to help Chamū get to safety, and Fumi and her teammates saved both of them after they were washed overboard. The next day, Shiro, Ken and Fumi become friends with Hikaru.

After returning to the Land of the Moon, the team found that the country had been taken over by Shabadaba, one of the nobles and a former friend of Michiru. Having hired three powerful ninja to assist him, Shabadaba had disposed of the king, and planned to do the same with Michiru and Hikaru, the remaining heirs to the throne. He ordered the military forces to kill them all, but the team was able to escape with the help of some soldiers still loyal to the king. Escaping to a hidden cave, Michiru found that his father was still alive, but Fumi, although able to heal his petrified arm, was only able to keep him alive for a little while. The king revealed that he had suspected that something like this would happen, and had arranged for the journey to keep Michiru out of harm's way. Before dying, the king told Michiru and Hikaru that people are truly important in life, not material goods. During an attempt to escape the country by boat, the three ninja hired by Shabadaba attacked, disabling Team 13 and Yui with reaction-dulling poison that slowed their reactions. The prince was captured, but Shiro’s Mirror Vision technique is able to repel the attacking ninja before the prince's son could be taken.

At the castle, Shabadaba's reasons for taking over the country were revealed to be purely material, the same things Michiru had considered important, as he intended to use the nation's wealth for himself rather than the people. Michiru was disgusted by Shadabada's attitude, and realised the truth of what his father had said. Shabadaba decided to put him to death by a drawn out hanging: he had Michiru balance on a board of wood not strong enough to support his weight while wearing a noose, ensuring that, sooner or later, he would fall and be hanged. With the help of the circus Michiru had purchased earlier, Yui's team made a rescue attempt with Hikaru and the rogue soldiers, infiltrating the palace by disguising themselves as members of the circus. One by one, Yui and her team fought individual battles: Yui uses Sage Mode so can fight off the many soldiers in the courtyard, while each of the genin fought one of the ninja. Ken killed his opponent, Kongō, using Reverse Lotus. Shiro was able to dispatch his poison and genjutsu - using opponent, Karenbana, by shattering a chandelier to locate her by watching where she moved, and subsequently killed her with Dragon Flame Technique. It turned out Karebana had worn too much perfume (which had helped Shiro locate her opponent while in a genjutsu by smelling for the perfume).

Funi fought against Ishidate, the leader of the three ninja, while helping Hikaru reach his father. Hikaru shot an arrow, severing the rope around Michiru's neck, and Fumi's Water sharks caught the prince and his father. Ishidate was enraged, and attempted to kill Fumi, but Shadabada ordered him to deal with Michiru. Ishidate powers up his petrification glove to the fullest as Shadabada continues to tell him which target to pick. Enraged by his constant bicker, Ishidate accidentally petrifies Shadabada. In the penultimate scene, Fumi, her leg disabled by his opponent's strange petrification technique, rode on Michiru's shoulders to attack with her Water Dragon techique, which then reflected the light of the moon in such a manner that it grew and took on a crescent shape, creating the Crescent Moon Sea Dragon Technique. He hit Ishidate with this attack, sending him flying and destroying Shadabada's stone remains killing them both. After Ishidate's death, Michiru took the throne of the country, and promised to rule as his father had done while starting on a diet, beginning weight training and once the country settles down he was going to pick Hikaru's mama, Amayo. As Yui was immobilised due to overuse of the Sage Chakra, her team decided to take a vacation in the Land of the Moon while he recovers. Two weeks later, Yui has regained her strength and the team departs as the saviours of the Crescent Moon Kingdom. King Michiru decides to once again try reconnecting with his wife, now knowing what he shouldn't do.

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On 2018-07-31 15:03:45Show All Posts
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Guys, friendly reminder that every story, after the shorts about the character's backstory are reproductions of the Naruto movies. I am still working on changing the plot to fit the rest of the characters.

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On 2018-08-02 15:57:00Show All Posts
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Adventure Forth: Pophecy Arc

The opening scene of the story showed Yui Aragaki fighting a monster, only to be killed by it. The setting then went back to a few days previous, where a man named Yomi (the word literally means "Underworld" in Japanese culture) attacked a shrine, to retrieve the spirit of Mōryō, a demon who attempted to take over the world and create his "Thousand Year Kingdom". Since he was lacking a body, Yomi offered his as a temporary substitute, until they could retrieve Mōryō's original one sealed in a different shrine. The only threat to Mōryō's plan was a Prophet known as Shion, who could seal his spirit away once more. He raised a stone army from their slumber, to attack the rest of the world, while his four subordinates went to murder Shion. They were given special chakra creatures - parasites to enhance their strength.

To deal with the threat, the Hidden Leaf village sent out many advance teams to stall the stone army. Yui Aragaki, Ken Jin, Shiro Takisada and Fumi Nikaido were sent to guard Shion, and deliver him to the shrine where Mōryō's body was sealed. They fended off her four would-be assassins, who exhausted themselves in a failed attempt to kill Ken, who rush in without a plan. Shion recognizes Yui from his vision earlier and told her of her upcoming death; while initially sceptical, his assistant, Taruho, explained that Shion could see the future, and all 100 predictions she had made had come true. As they headed for the shrine, the group was ambushed once again by Yomi's four subordinates, and split into two teams. Ken was able to redeem his brash actions at the first encounter, killing one of the enemy in a duel, using his Lightened Boulder Jutsu to excelerate his own speed. Meanwhile Yui was kept busy by her opponent, separated from the group. Shiro told Fumi to escape with Shion, unaware that his two opponents were actually just one man and a puppet, to distract him and let the remaining ninja catch up to Fumi and Shion. Fumi was then disabled by the remaining ninja, and Shion was killed.

This turned out to be a ruse: the dead "Shion" was actually Taruho, who transformed himself into a copy of Shion to trick them into thinking they had killed the real one. Shion explained that her power worked by allowing her spirit to jump back in time at the moment of her death, thereby allowing her to avoid it by having someone die in her place. Yui insisted that she would not die, and likewise would keep Shion safe, breaking the cicle. Thanks to Ken, Shiro realised that the remaining three ninja must keep replenishing their chakra to battle effectively. Yui was sent on ahead with Shion, while Fumi and Ken tricked their opponents into wasting their chakra on futile attacks. When they ran out of chakra and they had to repleni*, Shiro usad his Seal of Red Lotus to disabled the final ninja, who was providing the chakra, leaving the other two powerless against Ken and Fumi. At the mountain temple where Mōryō's body was kept, Yui and Shion found the stone army waiting. On the first attempt to get pass the army, both Yui and Shion fell off a cliff. Afterwards, Yui came up with a plan and promised Shion that he would protect her. Yui then held the army back using Shadow Clones while Shion headed inside the temple to begin the sealing ritual. Despite the valliant effort of Yui, her Shadow clone Wall was about to collapse, seconds before she got saved by a dispatched ANBU team from the Hidden Leaf, send to assist her team. The ANBU masked Raiden there uses the commotion to send Yui after the prophet, while he and his team keeps back the stone soldiers.

Yomi was already inside, and tricked Shion into beginning the technique with the villian inside the barrier, allowing Mōryō's spirit to reunite with his body. Yui came to rescue the prophet. About to see his prediction of her death come true, Shyon used his power to change Yuis's fate, intending to kill himself and Mōryō in order to save her. Yui stopped him seconds before his death, saying that she promised to protect him and used Shoot Down Giant Rasengan, with both their chakra, to destroy Mōryō, creating a volcano where the shrine used to be in the process.

With Mōryō gone, Yui asked Shion what he intended to do now. The prophet replied that Mōryō was a demon caused by the evil thoughts, and that there was bound to be another Mōryō someday. Because of this, Shion said that he must continue the line of prophets, that would suppress demons like Mōryō. Then he asked Yui if he would help (indirectly asking if she will mother his child) to everyone's shock, which a misunderstanding Yui, happily agreed to. Shenanigans Ensue.

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On 2018-08-11 17:10:16Show All Posts
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Adventure Five: Bonds of Friendship

A mysterious group of ninja from the Land of the Sky made a surprise attack on the Hidden Leaf Village. This was because Hidden Leaf had nearly destroyed the Land of the Sky during the Second Shinobi World War. The group began attacking the Hidden Leaf, causing mass mayhem, with Sora-nin - flying ninja using a Winged Mechanical Device and bombarding the village. A boy had come a very long way to inform the Hidden Leaf that his village had been attacked, and that he was looking for his sensei, who was currently in the Leaf Village, so that he could go back with him to heal the injured at his village. A three-man team, consisting of Yui, Ken and Fumi, were sent to accompany the boy, Amaru, and Shinnoi, his sensei, to help Amaru's village. The team travelled through a forest full of eerie beasts and poisonous animals via small rowing boats down a river. A Sora-nin scout suddenly appeared in the sky. Ken, Fumi and Shinnoi hid by the riverside with Yui and Amaru hiding underwater until the Sora-nin had passed. While underwater, Amaru dropped his scalpel, a present from his beloved sensei, and swam down to get it. As he tried to resurface, he became caught in the reeds. After freeing Amaru from the reeds and helping him back into the boat, Yui noticed that Amaru was, in fact, a "she", due to her * and corset. Yui blushed, before a poisonous piranha-like fish bit her and she fainted. Later on, Yui woke up still blushing, partly because Amaru was *ing the poisonous blood out of the wound on her thigh, thus saving Yui. The konoichi asked her if she was a "she", and suggested that Amaru had feelings for her sensei, which she was slapped for. (MASSIVE YIRI FANSERVICE SCEEEEN)

Meanwhile, at Hidden Leaf, the Sora-nin retreated because they were out of chakra to continue flying, so the Leaf sent another special team to search for their base. Adult Sai approached the ships they were using as a base near a beach on one of his ink birds to attract their attention and to gauge their abilities, while Shikamaru and the newly appointed jonin Shiro Takisada hid behind some rocks near the shore, waiting for the fourth man of their team, Adult Shino, to infiltrate and damage their base. Meanwhile Raiden Asakura arrives in a retreat base of Leaf’s Shadow ANBU devision, bringing report of the attack on the Hidden Leaf. Here his superior is revealed, an ageless looking boy by the name of Hiruko. After the report, Raiden asks for permission to join the resistance of the Village with the rest of the ANBU agents, but Hiruko stops him. Hiruko reveals that Leaf’s Shadow was actually informed for the attack and that’s the reason they relocated in this particular place. Raiden demands explanation, but Hiruko simply say that it is part of the “Greater Plan”. Still Raiden is unsure in the ideals of the Leaf’s Shadow, but is send to follow Ken Jin and his team out of the village.

Yui and company finally reached Amaru's village, and found that the village had been badly attacked, with some parts now in ruins and with the inhabitants nowhere to be seen. Amaru ran around trying to find some villagers before she unknowingly triggered a trap which sent a volley of kunai flying towards her. Her sensei, Shinnoi, rushed to block the kunai to protect her, but was hit in the process. Ken, Yui and Fumi hurried to the scene but it was too late, and Shinnoi died of his fatal injuries. After Amaru came to her senses, they continued to look for villagers, with Raiden now on his way to the village. Later on, Ken, Yui and Fumi decided to search for the villagers without Amaru. Eventually, Ken met up with Yui, who was looking at ruins in the distance. They went together to explore them, and found themselves in front of a evil monster calling itself the "Zero-Tails", which identified itself as a version of a tailed beasts that fed on the darkness of human souls, and had somehow taken over Amaru. Ken proved to be no match for the beast and fell unconscious. The creature sensed that Yui had a huge sage chakra power inside of her, so it taunted Yui and coaxed him to use that power by saying that he cannot save anyone without it. This made Yui remember his failure in saving her teammate Hiroyuki, and became emotionally unstable, which caused her to attack. In her rage, she knocks out the Zero-Tails, using her Sage Art: Wind Style: Sand Dust, shedding the tailed beast’s chakra cloak, in exchange of her chakra for the moment. Unable to keep down the beast, she is assisted by the quickly recovered Ken, who combines the Sand Dust Technique with his own – Wood Style Universe, entangling the beast in roots.

Yui pleaded with Amaru to ignore the darkness in her heart, which finally resulted in the beast being defeated. The Hidden Leaf shinobi decided to split up, with Yui continuing to search for the villagers and the injured and drained Ken and Fumi returning to Konoha to get help. Amaru, who was supposed to go with Fumi and Ken, stayed behind to help Yui. They then found some old ruins that Shinnoi had mentioned earlier, and entered them. Shinnoi was inside unharmed, and spoke of conquering the world with the power of darkness. Amaru, excited that her sensei was still alive, ran to hug him. Yui noticed that something wasn't right, and Shinnoi laughed mockingly at Amaru for trusting him. Shinnoi explained how he had been researching the power of darkness for about 15 years, and that he had finally found it in the Hidden Leaf. Apparently, he made a deal with Hiruko from the Leaf’s Shadow to exchange information about Bloodlimit users for a scroll and information, exposing the location of the Hidden Leaf for the shinobi from the Land of Sky. He claimed that all he needed now was a secret scroll with the reincarnation technique written on it. He then transformed into a muscular, youthful form, and Yui charged towards him, only to be outmatched again and again, with the young konoichi becoming more and more injured.

Shinnoi, in his Body Revival form, tried to convince Yui to use Natural chakra, with Amaru distraught and in tears whilst Shinnoi and Yui battled. Ever since she was small she had had a strange illness, and no-one had liked her, fearing that they would be infected. Only Shinnoi had dared to care for her, and had managed to cure her. Yui told her not to throw her feelings away, while the evil Shinnoi jeered at her. She finally admitted her love and feelings to her sensei, to which Shinnoi merely laughed. Yui attacked him and managed to land a hit, although it didn't seem to affect Shinnoi. The villain attacked now, beating Yui to the ground, causing her to retreat to a corner. Before his final *, his strike is blocked by Raiden’s Shadow Clone, using his sword. The clone was immediately destroyed but gave enough time for the real Raiden to land down and carry Yui away. He reveal he works for Hiruko and the Leaf’s Shadow. He only protects a Leaf ninja and asks for Shinnoi to retreat. Shinnoi attacks, but his Dark Chakra suddenly runs empty. Apparently, Raiden’s Shadow clone used Lightning sealing slash technique, forcing the flow of dark chakra to stop, causing the next attack to drain the remaining reserves in Shinnoi’s body. Raiden Explains, that the reason for that is that Shinnoi receive chakra from an outside source. Shinnoi then fled the scene, with Raiden pursuing him. Yui told Amaru to go find the villagers, held hostage in the fortress, obvious fueling the dark chakra flow, while she went after Raiden. She found Raiden in a room, and asked him what he was doing there, which Raiden ignored, afraid he will reveal his identity under the ANBU mask. In the same room was a co*, absorbing dark chakra. Shinnoi had fused with the co*, and attacked Yui and Raiden.

All of their counterattacks proved useless, as any chakra they used was absorbed by the co* and rendered harmless. Using tentacles as his arms, Shinnoi grabbed hold of both of them and began draining their chakra.Raiden reaches with a hand towards Yui. Sensing his plan, the wind kunoichi uses her Sage art Rasengan. Her technique is infused by Raiden’s lightning style charge, making a devastating combined attach by the name of Hurricane Rasengan. The combined chakra technique devastated the room and the co*-like best, revealed to be the true Zero-Tails. The two annihilate both the co* and Shinnoi inside it.

Amaru found Fumi and the villagers in a cell, and managed to free them all before finding them a flying lifeboat for them to escape in. Yui rushed out of the ruins, and ordered Amaru to go. There they find that the fortress is in fact flying. Apparently, it was part of the complex of the Hidden Sky village, ninja village in the Land of Sky, destroyed long ago. The power of the Zero-Tails was keeping it afloat after they arrived. Raiden explains it is falling down now when the energy of the Zero-Tails is gone. The only way out is a sky-boat, a paraplanner-like plot device, looking like a winged boat, because our writer got lazy. Fumi help the villagers to go in, while Amaru refused, but Raiden then threw her into the boat by force. The boat stuck on the launching ramp. Yui uses her Rasengan to release the boat with minimal results, since she got seriously injured in the fight with Shinnoi and lost a lot of chakra. Behind her Raiden uses his Chidori Long Spear technique and cut of the entire ramp off the main building, releasing the boat with Amaru, Yui and Fumi on board, staying behind.

Accepting his fate as the fortress falls down, Raiden comes in terms with his consciousness, demonstratively leaving Shadow’s Leaf. He proceeds destroying the Fortress with his Chidori Long Spear, over and over, ruining the structure. Finally, when the foundations are in ruins, he simply let himself fall. Yui saw Raiden from the boat, and, grabbing a pair of Sora-nin wings, flew to catch him. Upon reaching him, she removed the wings to grab him, and they fell together. But they both are now out of chakra and the falls in inevitable. While falling she removes the bird-faced ANBU mask, to look in the eyes of her friend one last time. Since it got really sad, I will only add that someone, most positively Hokage Konohamaru, summoned a from mount Myoboku, presumably Gamakichi, to take them and keep them from the fall. Upon returning home, Raiden explains to the Hokage the plans and actions of Leaf’s Shadow. With it the raids against Hiruko and his subordinates in the Hidden Leaf start, leaving Raiden with the position of a half-criminal. Despite that, his redemption is accepted by Yui and her team and Konohamaru does not put charges against Raiden, making up the story he was send in the Leaf’s Shadow as a spy for the Hokage. The story ends with Hiruko’s new location, leaving the village with his most trusted shinobi. He promises revenge upon the Village for betraying him and mostly team Yui. His new plan is in motion.

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On 2018-08-23 14:05:13Show All Posts
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Last Arc: Will of Fire
The story concerns the potential outbreak of a Idon’tKnowWhatNumber Shinobi World War when ninja with Bloodlimit abilities begin to disappear from Hidden Cloud, Hidden Stone, Hidden Mist, and Hidden Sand Villages. Team Yui is sent on a mission to follow the tracks of the missing kekkei genkai-wielding ninja, which leads them to Mount Shumisen, located between the Land of Earth and Hidden Grass Village. The new team now includes Raiden Asakura (Speed of light uniform). With the assistance of his friends, they reach a certain point, where they can’t proceed further due to the lack of jurisdiction. There, chimera-like creatures attack them which they quickly defeat, although Ken is injured in the process. Back at the Hidden Leaf, Yui gives a report on the mission to Lord Konohamaru, while worrying that the next ninja targeted will be Ken. Konohamaru seems to not care so much, telling Yui to relax. At the hospital, Yui gives Ken her bells, which they used for their first drill together, and tells him to fix them because she crushed them. Konoha Anbu are sent to Mount Shumisen by Konohamaru to search the area for tracks of the missing Bloodlimit ninja. There, a mysterious ninja along with his followers, absorb their chakra with his mysterious technique using their Earth nature affinity against them

That night, the same mysterious ninja, the mastermind and antagonist of the film known as our old Leaf’s Shadow leader Hiruko, projects his image over the skies of the Five Great Ninja Villages, introducing himself as a shinobi of Hidden Leaf. He states that he has taken the kekkei genkai of the four missing ninja using the Chimera Technique, and that he plans to gain the fifth and final Bloodlimit technique which will make him immortal. By doing so, he declares A Shinobi World War. Hidden Leaf is believed to be behind the incident, as by the way Hiruko introduced himself, it seems that Konoha is using or working with Hiruko. Rumours circulate that they are preparing a rebellion. With the other nations amassing troops at the Land of Fire's borders, threatening invasion, the Fire Daimyo/Feudal Lord orders Konohamaru to apprehend those who are responsible and prove Konoha's innocence; in the event of failure, the Land of Fire will be forced to destroy the village in order to preserve world peace. Konohamaru is awaiting Shinki, the Kazekage of the Hidden Sand, at a secret meeting place to discuss what shall be done. However, on the way there Shinki and his Hidden Sand shinobi are attacked by a bird-like creature, which traps them in an avalanche.

Meanwhile, Hiruko states that the Chimera Technique alone can only absorb a maximum of four kekkei genkai, and that certain conditions, most importantly the light af an annular eclipse, which is two days away, is required for the absorption of the fifth and final Bloodlimit Techique, which will make him immortal. That night, Hiruko appears before Raiden in a dream, activating a Puppet Curse he had placed on him over ten years ago, planning on taking out his ex-agent. Raiden ignores his teammates, hoping to protect them, asks Konohamaru to allow him to go, for the sake of the village. Before he leaves, Raiden asks Konohamaru to place a special seal on him which will automatically activate when Hiruko attempts to absorb him, causing a chakra explosion, to destroy the villain and Sacrifice Raiden.

The same night, Shiro is visiting Third Hokage's grave while Raiden is visiting His ex-teammate's grave, the grave of Hiroyuki. Raiden asks Shiro to tell the rest of the team that he is leaving the village, and not to follow him. As Raiden lets Hiruko take over his body, Ken sees him and chases him. Shiro stops him and tells him what Raiden told him to say. At the Hokage's office, Konohamaru orders Team 13 and the rest of the shinobi to stay away from Raiden, labelling him as a missing-nin for the sake of the secret mission. After the others leave, Konohamaru tells Yui the truth, trusting that she will do what he needs to do as the leader. Meanwhile, Fumi comes to rescue Ken from the cell that Shiro put him in, then they leave the village to rescue Raiden. A group of shinobi are sent to retrieve them. The next day, Hidden Sand is lining up troops and weapons at the borders of the Land of Fire, thinking that Konoha attacked Shinki, their Kazekage. When Ken and Fumi follow Raiden, Yui, Shiro and the rest of the retrieving team meet with them, and try to bring them back. Ken scold Yui for what she taught them during their bell test: "It is true that in the world of ninja, those who break the rules and regulations are regarded as *, but those who abandon their comrades are even worse than *," which changes the minds of Yui and Shiro. However the scene is interrupted by Ichi, Leaf’s Shadow renegade agent, subordinate of Hiruko, who was sent by Hiruko to stop and/or delay them, using his chimera snakes. Shiro stays behind to allow the others to pass through the first gate.

Ni, the second agent of Hiruko and her chimera nin-dogs stop them at the next gate, and Ken stays behind to delay her, while Fumi and Yui pass. As Fumi and Yui reach the next gate, San, the third Hiruko agent, appears riding the bird that fires exploding feathers and originally attacked the team at the start. Yui feels like she is the only one who can hold back someone with the level of San and sends Fumi further down the road At this point, Ken defeats Ni, using combination of Wood style and Primary Lotus, and Shiro is able to distract Ichi with genjutsu Illusions long enough to unleash his Red Lotus seal on the enemy. Yui is capable to combine her shadow clones with a neurotoxin, Fumi left for her. The neurotoxic reveals one of the Villain’s secrets – that Raiden is not a target of revenge, but a bait for team 13 and Ken’s Bloodlimit Wood Style. Yui also ask him where Raideni is headed. However, San breaks out of the Neurotoxin’s grip. He then summons Ichi and Ni, uses the Chimera Technique on them and himself, and the three become a huge chimera, which seems to be a combination of all their respective chimera beasts, possessing all of their abilities.

Meanwhile, Shinki is thinking of what Udon Ise and Moegi Kazamatsuri said while aiding in the recovery of Shinki and the Hidden Sand ninja, the teammates of Konohamaru from his days as a regular ninja, now send to a rescue. They have told Shinki that they 3 believes Raiden, or even Ken, will not be able to defeat Hiruko, and it is up to Shinki’s depending on whether he believes in their strength combined or not. As the war between Hidden Leaf and Hidden Sand is about to begin with ground combat troops and heavy artillery from both sides facing each other, Konohamaru appears above Gamaken, his summoned frog, and gives to the Hidden Sand the proof that Shinki is still alive. At that moment, Shinki moves to where Team 13 are headed and stops them. He says their will is not what Raiden wants, and they begins to fight the Kazekage. Shinki states that theyare too idealistic, and that they don’t have the power to make their goals become true. However, the four Konoha Shinobi strongly state by the belief that as a fellow comrades and friends, they cannot allow Raiden to sacrifice himself. With their combined power, they are capable to break through the infamous Sand shield of the Kazekages and Ken punches Shinki. The rest of the members of Konoha retrieving team arrive to meat the freshly defeated 3-person chimera creature, and they bind the chimera beast, with the help of regular ANBU agents. The shinobi meet Shinki, who tells them that he felt what Team 13 feels in the battle. The Konoha Retrieving team continue on.

Meanwhile, Team 13 reach the final gate, and realises this is the place they came to on their past mission. Ken goes to Raiden and tries to stop him, but Raiden walks on with no response. When Ken grabs his arm, he sees the seal on his wrist, and Fumi tells him what it is.Shiro and Yui nod to each other and reveal that Konohamaru placed the seal on him, so that they may defeat Hiruko at the sacrifice of Raiden, which was the reason they were trying to stop them in a first place. Raiden passes through the final gate before the temple.

As Team 13 approach the temple, Ken hears Hiruko's voice, and questions why he did this, and Hiruko answers by telling his story. He claims to have been a former friend of the Village. That Hidden Leaf meant everything to him and he was able to protect it better than anyone. But on his way into the politics of the Hidden Villages, he had to make sacrifices no one else was capable of. He knew what needs to be done and that everything can and must be sacrifice to protect the village. He even developed his own Chimera technique, which allows him to create a synthetic body for himself, so he can live further and further, defending the village better and longer than any Hokage. If the reest of the shinobi lack his vision and are too short-sighted to see the Greater Good Leaf’s Shadow was providing, then he was ready to let them burn and replace the village with a new one. As Raiden reaches the temple, Hiruko appears from the shadows of the temple, and welcomes Raiden. Seeing it as the only way to save Raiden, Ken, Yui and Fumi try to defeat Hiruko although Shiro tries to stop them. Hiruko, using his four kekkei genkai: Storm Release, Dark Release, Steel Release, and Swift Release, defeats them with little effort.

He then steps into the temple with Raiden. Ken stands up, deciding that he cannot give up. Shiro tries to stop him, saying that he must protect the unborn children of Konoha, the "King", the future, not to waste time over every soldier. Yui states that she'll protect them too, and that she loves the village for its shinobi, who will sacrifice themselves to save one another. However, deciding who will be sacrificed from the start isn't what Fumi, now adding to the conversation, wants, and She believes there is no future for the children if the Hidden Leaf becomes a place, to Hiruko’s design . As they walks away, Shiro sees the First Hokage’s ideals in them, and protects join quickly, asking to join on that noble quest. He states that he has to learn more about this, if he wants to inherit the Will of Fire, trusting the future of Hidden Leaf in those Ideals.

They enter the temple, where Hiruko begins the absorption at the beginning of the eclipse. Ken, trying to save Raiden, creates Wood Style roots and breaks into the slime with multiple Rasengans by Yui as aid, and pulls him out. Raiden wakes up, asks Ken why he is here with him and then sighs that the plan failed. Hiruko is still alive, and he states that the eclipse hasn't ended yet, and releases a large amount of chakra, reducing the surrounding area to rubble. When Hiruko summons the chimera beast that the Konoha retrieving team were keeping restrained, Shiro, Fumi and Ken fight the beast while Yui and Raiden face Hiruko. Shiro notes that Hiruko's weak spot is his chest, which is still hollow as it is the space that Hiruko wants to assimilate the fifth Bloodlimit element into. As the chimera beast begins to gain an advantage over them, the Leaf Retrieving team arrive to help. Here are revealed children of the original characters, members of clans like Hyuga, Nara, Aburame, Akamichi and Yamanaka as members of the Konoha Retrieving team, but their names would not be revealed. Meanwhile, Hiruko is gaining an advantage over Yui and Raiden, easily absorbing their techniques: the Giant Rasengan and Lightning blade. Hiruko gives Yui a taste of her own attack - Rasengan and returns Raiden his Lightning beam. As a last resort, the entire team concentrate their effort, using combination of all elements at once against the enemy. Hiruko tries to absorb and copy it, but cannot combine the high level of shape manipulation with the high level of nature transformation. At last is revealed that Yui used Sage chakra in her last Rasengan, idea by Shiro, fueling the body of the villain with natural energy, forcing him to transform into a snake-like creature, since he is not trained as a Sage.

In his final moments, Hiruko, forced by the disintegration of his synthetic body to his original form, asks Raiden what he did wrong. Raiden tells him that he used others to overcome his weakness, and only tried to become perfect himself. Hiruko says that is the way the strong ones think, and that he did not have any comrades. Suddenly, Hiruko sees his old friends and some others appear before his eyes, and they tell him that they were there for him. Raiden tells him if he had tried to bond with them, they would've helped him and he shouldn't have tried to do everything by himself. Hiruko then tells Raiden that was what Raiden tried to do this time, abandoning his comrades. Raiden says that he and Hiruko made the same mistake as they were both lost. Hiruko asks him if he has finally made a connection, and dies. Raiden looks over to see most of the shinobi around cheering for his team. He then says that everyone have long surpassed him. Shinki appears before the Hidden Sand ninja army, and tells them everything has been solved, and to withdraw. Konohamaru, Udon and Moegi talk about how they have been saved, and that the kids are completely different than they were at their age. They end the conversation with a conclusion that they are getting old, and a decision to leave the future in the hands of young generation in which they can freely put their faith into. The movie ends at Mount Shumisen with Raiden thinking about his pas. He smiles at Yui after seeing the similarities between the past and present Yui and Hiroyuki’s memories . Yui takes the smile as something creepy and random. The Shinobi surround them on various parts of the rocky ledge, each give their input on Raiden’s stalker’s acting upon seeing this. Raiden hurriedly denies their assumptions but not before Yui panics and flees from him. Raiden then chases after the fleeing Yui trying to explain that it's a misunderstanding. Bad joke endings – bad joke endings everywhere.


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On 2018-11-14 22:45:49Show All Posts
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I fixed it after months, thanks for noticing. :D

I didnt think anyone would read it tho.




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On 2018-11-15 21:28:54Show All Posts
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It is as far away from cannon as possible. In the game the 5 of them are the same age. I just made up some backstory for them to fit what i think is the truth. Enjoy altering it as much as you want.
I am sorry for the many spell and grammar mistakes, English is not my native language, but i will try to fix as many as I can.




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On 2019-07-19 18:12:19Show All Posts
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Since those stories were mostly retelling of the movies, i will work on a shorter prequels - the genin years and the chunin exam of the trio. Hope to do it soon.

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On 2020-06-02 19:32:22Show All Posts
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  • noob999 On 2020-05-29 04:10:22
  • AWESOME!!!!

    wait where is boruto?


I ignored him, I start writing this before there was Boruto.

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