This has been a problem plaguing me for quite a while. I do not expect anyone to have perfect grammar, but the grammar should at least be understandable. Sentences should not be convoluted, but should be clear and concise. Sentences should be understandable at the very least. A few ninjas in the game, have weirdly worded sentences that are very confusing in nature. For Konan Angel of God, her standard attack it says: Will also immediately reduce its Mystery Skill's Cooldown Time by 1 round. The problem with this is that there is a period before that sentence, thus implying that the sentence above is an independent clause, whereas it's a dependent clause as the mystery cooldown will only reduce by 1 round if the standard attack causes knockdown. This will lead to confusion for many players due to the nature the sentence is worded. For Tsunade Sannin Era, her last passive is also extremely convoluted and there is also not a single comma in the sentence. I am fairly certain that the sentence in nature is a run-on sentence. There are also spelling errors as well. While they seem insignificant, spelling errors show that there is no desire to proofread. It shows laziness, and an inability to care for the game. Thank you for your time and consideration into this topic.
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