I have a suggestion regarding the Sakura's gift event. Well, more of an idea of how to make it look better.
For Sakura, make her overworld design match that of her design for the event, make her Pre-Forest of Death, It's in the plot instances, as early as Sasuke Uchiha plot instance.
Second of all, make the grammar better. "I have been so busy lately, so many stuff to do, need some help here", that's not the best text, may I suggest...
"I've been so busy lately, so much stuff to do, could you help me?"
And third, add more personality to the mission part. Instead of her just saying what to do, like talk to this village's villagers, do arena, etc, have her give a reason,and actually put a message in the top, such as...
"Do you mind telling some leaf/sand/rain villagers that I'll be there later to help them out?"-talking.
"There's this competition I really want to participate in, but I don't know if it's safe, can you check it out for me?"-arena
And after you do that, have her send a message instead of just the food sack message popping up, such as...
"Thanks a lot for the help! That really helps me a lot, here, take these food sacks I bought at the nearby store as thanks!"
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