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[ Fanfiction ] Fight Against Pein Chapter 10 (Rating T)

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  • Tiami On 2017-05-27 21:05:23
  • "Guys! Something's wrong with Naruto! He's just sitting there!"- this made me laugh soo much- ofc Naruto sitting still must be ill or something bad happening, it's just not like him :'D

    Overaly- great work! Interesting backstory of each character, in previous chapters too. Have a cookie! :victory:
Agreed! The backstories were a nice touch to the fight








Crimson opened his gates? oh my goodness
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