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[ Fanfiction ] Fight Against Pein Chapter 8 {Rating T}

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ROAR

BOOM

Tendo's body slammed into the side of the crater, creating a spider-web crack. The Deva path took himself out and narrowly dodged a Bijuudama heading towards him. The Kyuubified Naruto roared at him and created a shockwave that caused rocks to crack and flew towards Pein, who shielded himself.

"Tch. This is starting to get troublesome. Shinra Tensei!"

Tendo unleashed another gravity attack and sent Naruto flying again. The ernaged jinchuuriki flipped himself and landed down. He disappeared in a blur and appeared behind Tendo and slammed his tails against him, sending him down on the ground, creating yet another crater.

Naruto began forming yet another Bijuudama and sent it straight to Tendo, sending him down underground before from the inside the hole, an explosion blew up the area and caused a large crater to form. Tendo jumped back in to the fray and shot chakra rods towards the chakra covered Naruto.

The six tails around him merely deflected every chakra rod back to Tendo, who started to run away from the rod's range. He jumped onto a boulder and lifted off other boulders and launched them to Naruto.

Naruto began to spin wildly like a disk and smashed through the boulders with ease. He spun faster and quickly appeared above Tendo, shocking him.

"What?! How fast was that? Such speed!"

And Naruto slammed his tails against Tendo, slamming him onto ground again. Tendo tried to stand up but crashed onto the ground. The cause? Naruto's clawed hand.

The Kyuubified Naruto's hand grew and began clawing against Tendo's cloak. Tendo tried fruitlessly to stand up but kept getting interrupted by Naruto.

"This is getting annoying. Shinra Tensei!"

And Naruto was slammed away from Tendo, crashing onto a boulder. Tendo readjusted himself and saw the right side of his cloak. He frowned and a chakra rod slid out from his remaining sleeve.

Naruto crashed back and Tendo jumped away. He twirled his rod and stabbed it into Naruto's back, but the rod was quickly expelled from the body and Naruto slashed Tendo.

The Deva path grunted and landed back, staring at Naruto's white, soulless eyes.

"The chakra of the Kyuubi is such a powerful thing. Once we achieve it, all we need is the Hachibi. Come Kyuubi!"

Naruto roared and charged some sort of chakra projectile and shot it to Tendo.

"Shinra Tensei!"

The gravity attack once more acted like a barrier and blocked the attacks. One of the stray chakra * crashed against the ground, which caused the ground to tremble

The bodies of Azure, Crimson, Scarlet, Midnight and Breeze all layed down on the ground, away from the fighting. Azure's hand started to twitch, her body tossing and turning, still pinned to the ground with a chakra rod.

Inside the Mind of Azure, in her perspective

Where am I? Who am I? Where am I? Darkness, that's the only thing I can see right now. But soon enough, light began to fill the area and showed a room. It looked like a lab. I blinked and saw myself in a tube of sorts filled with water. In front of me was a pale man with purple like eye-liner around his eyes, smiling at me. It was pure, kind, and a genuine one.

"Greetings Azure-chan. Welcome to the world."

Azure...is that my name? Yeah, I think it is. The room rippled and showed me and someone wearing glasses teaching me something. The glasses-wearing guy's hand was suddenly covered in chakra, while I got happy.

"That's how you do it Azure-chan. Now, try to copy what I did. Don't get sad that you don't get it on the first try. Practice makes perfect after all."

I nodded at the guy and tried to do what he did, and look at that. I did whatever he did on my first try. The guy adjusted his glasses and pointed at a dummy.

"Now, try to slice through that dummy."

And so I did and the two halves fell down. The guy clapped his hands and rufled my hair, making chuckle.

"Looks like you're a natural Azure-chan. Your tou-sama would be proud. Now come, let me show you some more medical-ninjutsu."

Flashes of montages showed me training with the boy with the glasses, whose name was Kabuto. It showed me slicing through with my hand, the attack being called a Chakra Scalpel. The scene changed and showed my hands glowing green and spreading it through someone.

The room shifted and showed me fighting against people wearing camo clothes, but it looked like I was a bit older. Around a year, maybe? Anyways, I was holding a short sword and sliced through the people very quickly. I started to form my hands into...shapes? I don't know-wait, they're called hand signs!

I formed my hand into multiple ahnd signs and a large water dragon surged from behind me and shot to the various camo-wearing people. A clap could be heard and I turned around, seeing my papa approaching me.

"Very well done Azure-chan. You're progressing very quickly, you're making me proud."

I squealed in delight and hugged my papa. At least, I think he is. Once more the room transformed and showed me stumbling up to a gate.

I remember now, my father lost me and I got lost too. I tried to find my way back to him, but instead found myself into this village. They took me in for interrogation and interrogated me for weeks, before it was finally revealed I had amnesia. An old man, who they called their leader, took me out of the place and treated me like a grand daughter. He helped me heal and recover.

He gave me my own place and my own home. He recommended me to help in the hospital once he found out that I was great and helping people there. I enjoyed it a lot. Then he enrolled me in a school to help me get friends my age and it was there I met the five of them.

The area rippled and showed a young Azure blushing at the sight of a brunette, who was blushing.

I met Scarlet-kun there, and I instantly gained a crush on him. He was the first one I befriended. He's so cute!

Once again, the room changed and showed me talking to a blonde girl and a white-haired boy.

The next one I became friends with is Breeze-chan and Midnight-san. They seemed cool and tried to make me comfortable.

The area shifted and showed a dark-skinned orangenette.

Next was Crimson-niisan. He's so likeable and tried to get us all along and tries to guide us through some problems. He's my favorite behind Scarlet-kun.

Finally, the room shifted once again and showed a whiskered blonde laughing along with me.

And then there's Naruto. He's so likeable and full of energy. Even when things got down, he helped us up. He tires to make us laugh and keeps hugging us, not that I don't mind from my little brother.

With that final memory, I finally remembered who I am. I am Azure Fang, a shinobi of Konohagakure no Sato. A medic-nin trained by a former Konoha-nin and by Tsunade Senju, a renowned Sannin. I was trained by a lot of people and became a jounin at a young age. I'm dating a fellow jounin, Scarlet Blaze and am friends with Midnight Blade, Breeze Dancer and Crimson Fist.

Lastly, I can remember that I was trying to help...NARUTO! Pein! A cloaked, blonde figure appeared before me and spoke.

"You still need to help my son, Azure-san."

Azure awake with a gasp and shot up. She gritted her teeth, seeing a chakra rod still embedded in her chest. She carefully plucked it out and panted. She covered the large wound and began patching it up. Azure looked up and saw a Kyuubified Naruto flipping around and sending Bijuudamas toward Tendo, who's cloak was now torn.

Azure looked around and saw her friends lying in their own pool of blood. Her eyes widened and dipped finger in her pool of blood. She ran to the first one nearest to her, which was Scarlet. Azure rubbed her dipped finger onto the summoning tatoo on her arm.

"Kuychiose no Jutsu."

A smoke popped up and revealed Katsuyuu. "Azure-chan, what happene-oh my!"

The state of Scarlet terrified Azure. She layed down Katsuyuu on her boyfriend and precisely took out the bullet in his chest and the other chakra rods. She crossed her hands and formed three shadow clones. Azure looked at Katsuyuu who nodded and split herself into four copies. Three of the copies landed on the three shadow clones and they ran to help their friends.

Azure teared up and the glow grew even more intense. Scarlet was covered thr bright glow, and his eyes began to flutter open. Scarlet stared at the sky before he looked around, until his sight fell upon Azure.

"Hey there Azure-chan, I'm glad you're okay." Scarlet smiled and pulled Azure closer into a hug.

"Scarlet-kun!"

The Genjutsu Master of the group pulled back from the hug and stood up. "Come on. Let's help out Naruto."

Azure nodded and they ran to help out their friend.

Next chapter, I'll show Scarlet reminiscing his past as well, and perhaps along with Crimson.
This post was last edited by Zephyr of Troviator at 2017-5-16 16:31
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On 2017-05-15 19:59:11Show this Author Only
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dat shinra tensei probably pisses naruto off so much, thats y he keeps chargin bak at pain.:lol:lol:lol
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  • xXKILLUAXx On 2017-05-15 19:59:11
  • dat shinra tensei probably pisses naruto off so much, thats y he keeps chargin bak at pain.:lol:lol:lol
its like throwing something your dog hates at it xD poor doggy- Kyuubi
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All of the secret backstories!




orochimaru is always watching you Azure
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  • MisakiFuuji On 2017-05-16 04:20:50
  • All of the secret backstories!




    orochimaru is always watching you Azure
I'd like to think that Azure was created by Orochimaru to fill a void in his heart. And sy thesized Azure to treat as a soldier, but also a child. That's why by birth, she already had the curse mark.
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  • Naked Snake On 2017-05-16 09:06:18
  • I'd like to think that Azure was created by Orochimaru to fill a void in his heart. And sy thesized Azure to treat as a soldier, but also a child. That's why by birth, she already had the curse mark.
Ah, it all makes sense now... Azure's skills...

For me, I think that all of the mains were created by some of Orochimaru's experiments. It would explain how Crimson has Wood Style, Breeze has Sage Mode, and maybe Midnight's 'bloodthirstiness'...
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  • MisakiFuuji On 2017-05-16 12:47:58
  • Ah, it all makes sense now... Azure's skills...

    For me, I think that all of the mains were created by some of Orochimaru's experiments. It would explain how Crimson has Wood Style, Breeze has Sage Mode, and maybe Midnight's 'bloodthirstiness'...
but what about Scar?
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Anyways, I was holding a short sword and sut through the people very quickly.Next was Crimson-niisan. He's so likeable and tried to get us all along and ties to guide us through some problems. He's my favorite behind Sacrlet-kun.
Cut* Scarlet* I'm sorryy, i have to point these things out >~<
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  • Norikr On 2017-05-15 23:40:14
  • its like throwing something your dog hates at it xD poor doggy- Kyuubi
:lol:lol:lol:lol:lol
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  • Naked Snake On 2017-05-16 13:58:02
  • but what about Scar?
...the sleeping thing, like the Hebihime has (totally did not just think of this)
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