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[ Fanfiction ] The Past and The Present: Water and Fire 2 [ Rating K+ ]

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On 2017-03-14 23:12:07Show All PostsDescending Order
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Second chapter is up! Thanks to all your love and support, encouraging me to write the next part. It really motivate me! :loveliness:
There might be some errors in terms of tenses and such; be warned!
Enjoy the second chapter and share your thoughts and comments!

< The Past; Water and Fire>

Azure gingerly swipe her father’s forehead with a wet cloth before dipping the cloth back into the half-filled basin. Her heart was crushed every time she glance over at her father’s ill-flushed face, lying motionlessly on his death-bed as he took in the last few breath. Her father was dying and here she was, witnessing the last of her family members fading away.

Death was an old friend in the Fang’s household, as she lost her younger brother first last two years followed by her oldest sister, then her mother, then her big brother and lastly, her father. Will it be her turn next?

She saw her father reaching out to her, skinny, cold hand cupping her cheek with surprising gentleness. His face was hollowed and he seemed to not have the strength to open his eyes to look at her for the last time. Azure held back her choking sobs.

“You will survive, my beautiful girl…” He croaked, “This cursed did not befall onto you…”

Why? Azure wanted to ask. How did she escape this epidemic? Why was she the only one not to be infected with this deathly illness?
“There must be a cure, father! I won’t give up.” She grasped her father’s hand, felt the first few tears falling down her chubby cheeks.

As if she was dreaming, she saw her father smiled, even though the grip in his hand was slipping away.

“I know you won’t, my sweet child… Never give up.” His voice grew meeker and Azure was having a hard time coping with reality.

“There is a way around this, I also believe it. Even if we are gone already, when you found the answer, there might be others that needed it… so don’t give up, my sweet child.”

His smile never crumbled, and his closed eyes seemed to be crinkled with amu*t. “I’ll be joining our family members now, we will be watching you always… don’t rush to follow us, enjoy your life… on behalf of us, Azure.”

We love you and we are grateful that you had escaped this illness. You are our final hope.

The hand falls to the ground, lifeless. But the smile on her father’s face remains, even in his last moment, he was happy.

It was then did reality finally sink in, whether Azure wanted to accept it or not, she was finally deemed an orphan at the age of 6.


“Please, let me stay here. “ Azure begged to the nurses at Konoha Hospital.

She was determined to learn medical jutsu and become a medical ninja. It was the first step to finding out the cause and the cure of her family inherited sickness. One of the nurses that had become her target looked at her with guilt-filled eyes.

Of course, everyone knew that blue coloured hair belonged to the Fang’s clan. Also, everyone in the hospital knew about the village’s failure to cure the said clan’s illness and now the sole survivor was here begging for a place to stay and learn even when the village had let her down so much.

“Let’s go see the head of the hospital, okay?” The nurse said with a nervous smile. Azure wasn’t unfazed by the lack of hospitality. If there’s one thing she was good at, its being stubborn and she will have things go her way this time.

When they entered the room, she was amazed to see the 2 most proficient medical ninja; Lady Tsunade and Lady Sakura. When the two figures turned her way, nothing was needed to be said. One nod by Lady Tsunade and she knows she was given the green light.
“Argh, that Middy. Always so careless.” Scarlet grumbled under his breath and his uncle beside him let out a chuckle, patting the pouting boy gently on the head.

“You know he was just too focused at his target. He apologized right?”

Scarlet glanced down at the jarringly cut on his right arm and remembered Midnight own wounds on his back.
They were having a taijutsu training session with his father and the target was for Midnight to steal the scroll from his father. Scarlet was playing enemy number 2 and had jumped out from behind ( yes, Scarlet knows attacking people from behind was an act of cowardliness ) and whipped a kunai at Midnight. He was horrified to know that he had made a hit and saw blood gushing out from the cut he made plus the startled cry of the boy was going to haunt him for days. Midnight, obviously surprised and hurt, spun around and slash his sword at him. Scarlet had barely gotten away and got his arm cut. Well, that was more of the Midnight he knew anyway, fast on his reflex.

Then it was silence between them, they didn’t even take notice of the amount of blood seeping out, but both knew that they had made a hit at each other.

“Okay, training is over. Medic please!” Scarlet’s father clapped his hand and the medic team rushed in, healing the wounds as fast as they had appear.
“I-I’m sorry.” Scarlet uttered, feeling guilty about the cut he had made to his friend. Midnight blinked a few times, as if trying to make senses of everything.
“Lesson for today; sometimes your allies can betray you. So it is always better to put your guard up at all times.” Raiken, Scarlet’s father said while ruffling Midnight’s silver hair. Scarlet was confused as why the boy cheeks suddenly turned red.

“How did we ran out of bandage again?”
Now it was his uncle’s cheek that turned red, and one Scarlet knows was from embarrassment.
“Hey, don’t look at your uncle like that! I was busy okay, and they didn’t told me anything either.” He defended himself, but Scarlet continued to look at him with an unamused expression.
His uncle, Ibi was the head of the medical department in the clan and he was in charged in taking care of the clan members’ wellbeing. It was his job also to get supplies from the hospital, which is why Scarlet is here accompanying him.
“Hello, I’m here to get supplies for the Blaze clan.”
Scarlet watches as everyone moved around in such hustle and bustle even though this was a hospital. Life in Konoha had been peaceful and his father always reminded him that he was the lucky generation, to enjoy the fruitful success of the Fourth Shinobi War.
“Scarlet, do you want to go and have a checkup? It’s going to take a while for uncle’s business to be over here.” The boy looked down at the pinkish line on his arm. He already told that he was going out for a while to Midnight so it wouldn’t hurt to extend his time more.
“I would love that, Ibi-san. “ He smiled and saw his uncle grinned back at him. “Go to room 510.”
So Scarlet walked through the corridor, dodging adults that were walking without a care in the world until he made it to room 510, knocking twice before entering.

This post was last edited by Venn at 2017-3-14 23:17
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On 2017-03-14 23:13:20Show All Posts
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Azure saw a boy with parted bowl cut hairstyle peeking into the room. When he saw her, there was surprised in his eye. “Oh, sorry! I didn’t know this room was taken.” “Ah, you must be Scarlet.” The doctor said and he stood up, ushering Scarlet into the room. “We were expecting you. This is Azure, she’s helping around the hospital.” At the mention of her name, Azure gave a small bow to the boy. She had learned to show respect to people and patients after working in the hospital for a few months now. After all, she was only freelancing here out of the staff’s pity. “Nice to meet you, Azure. I’m here for a checkup.” From Azure view, the way Scarlet walked into the room held grace and nobility and she was captivated. Whoever this person was, it was obvious he was from a well-respected family. “Take a seat then, Scarlet.” As the checkup proceeds, Azure watched with hunger at every single move the two did. When Scarlet showed his arm, Azure was quick to indentify the cause and she noted down everything the doctor said. Once in a while she could see the doctor looking at her uncomfortable but Scarlet was at ease, sometimes even asking for Azure opinions. During the checkup, a nurse knocked onto the doctor. “Doctor, we have an emergency! We need your assistances.” The shrill voice of the nurse resonances through the small room and the doctor quickly gets up, not before flashing a smile at them ( mostly at Scarlet though ). “Oh dear, looks like I have to go. However, the checkup is already over.” He said gently, “I had prescribed everything to you. Just clean it regularly and everything will be fine. Well then, I’ll take my leave.” With that, the doctor quickly left and Azure wondered if the panic of the emergency really caused him to leave so hastily. “So, your name is Azure, right?” Scarlet spoke up, glance at her curiously. “Why are you working here in the hospital? You looked as if you are around my age and that’s too young to be working.” Azure wondered if she should snapped at Scarlet for his meddling attitude, a hundred and a million replies running through her head. One stood out, that was telling the truth. Anyway, what does she had to lose for telling the truth? After all, she already lost everything; nearly. “My family died from an epidemic. I’m determine to find the cause and the cure.” Azure said gently, but there’s fire in her voice before the flame dampens slightly. “Besides, I have nowhere else to go. If I stay at the orphanage, for sure I wouldn’t be able to progress anything.” Azure was expecting pity, or worst even a slightly disgusted reaction from the boy – after all, her family died from an illness and there could be a high chance she was carrying one too, although the hospital already did countless checkup on her before letting her stay here. However, all Scarlet did was listened attentively and with his one eye visible, Azure could see contemplations in them. Scarlet was thinking of something; and whatever the boy was thinking had caused something to spark inside Azure. “Want to live with me? My clan have a few amazing medical ninjas too! Although it wouldn’t be as amazing as those working in the hospital.” He smiled sheepishly; his hands that were decorated with plastered were fiddling with the hem of his shirt. “And, um- I kinda don’t like the way the doctor treats you. It gives off the whole unwelcomed kind of atmosphere. “ Azure flinches a bit, Scarlet was right. She already knows that she wasn’t welcome here but having someone literally point that out- even more someone relatively the same age was bitter to swallow. Scarlet, noticing that he might had offended his new companion, started to panic but before he could say anything else, Azure cuts him off. “Wont I also be a burden at your place?” she asked quietly. Suddenly she felt sad. It was almost as if wherever she goes, she was always rejected. “No, of course not!” Scarlet quickly said, gentle hands holding Azure’s soft hands. He gave a small squeeze and made them look at each other. “My family and I would be more than happy to welcome you. I already have a friend living with me and he’s around our age too.” Scarlet smiled brighter and Azure saw that whoever this ‘friend’ was, he and Scarlet had a strong bond with each other. I want to be a part of it too, she thought. Scarlet continued, “I want us to grow up together, to grow stronger together! So that one day, we can help each other and more. After all, we’re never alone in this world.” Never alone. Azure eyes watered. It was then she realized, she had never moved on from her family’s death. All this time, she had lived with a heavy heart, soulless, emotionless. The only thing that fueled her was her desire to find the cure. She wasn’t fulfilling her family’s final wish, which was to enjoy life to the fullest. Maybe this was her calling, in the form of a very amazing boy whose red eye was pulling people deeper than any voice can. She was just six years old, but at that age she already knows how one moment, one person could change someone’s life. “I’ll be in your care then.” Azure said while sniffling, snot in her nose. She was smiling though and so was Scarlet. So contagious he was, and it was something she didn’t mind being infected with. This post was last edited by Venn at 2017-3-14 23:14
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On 2017-03-14 23:15:25Show All Posts
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“Alright, let’s go home now.” Ibi said cheerfully, both of his hands were occupied with the two children as they walked side by side.

Azure was still feeling shy, but Ibi-san hand was firmed in her grip, comforting as if to say she was okay now, that they weren’t going to leave her behind.

“Azure, where’s your slippers?” Ibi asked concernedly to their new family member and it was then Azure realized she had been walking barefoot and that the little pebbles were starting to irritate her feet. The hospital floors were smooth so it wasn’t really a fuss to be walking barefoot.

“Here.” Scarlet offered his and Azure was flustered.

“W-Wait, I can’t have yours. Then you will be barefoot also.” She tried to reject but the slippers were already being slipped into her – Azure cringe – battered feet by Ibi-san. Scarlet’s uncle didn’t seemed to mind that Azure was causing so much trouble to his nephew and that made Azure even more embarrassed. Such kindness, she thought.

“I’ll be fine. I have more pairs back home. Besides, you’re still recovering right? You need it more than I do.” The way Scarlet told everything so subtlety made Azure feeling light and the comfort of the slippers only adds to it.

“Beside, I learned a new trick! Watch this, uncle!”

Scarlet gently placed down the bags of supplies as he made handsigns and closed his eyes. There was a swift noise and the glow of chakra around the boy’s feet, incasing around it protectively.

“Ta-da! Feet armor.” Scarlet grins brightly and he jumps around to show that his feet were truly protected by his chakra armor. Azure was in awe.

“Oh, you’re a fast learner are you, you little!” Ibi grinned widely and circled Scarlet in a headlock, ruffling his nephew hair affectionately. Scarlet let out a squeal and tried to escape. They were laughing, Azure noted. They were happy- a family and Azure was going to be a part of this soon. She felt herself smiling.

“Alright, alright. Let’s go home now. Its already late and we all don’t want Middy to throw a tantrum.” Ibi said as he stood up and dust away the sand on his knees. He wiggled his eye brows at both of them and even though Azure had no idea what he was talking about, it made them giggle.


“I’ll go and set the supplies. Here,” Ibi hand over a roll of bandage and some plaster to Scarlet. “Use this to cover Midnight’s wounds. I’m sure you will be able to do it, and if you can’t, ask Azure for help.” Ibi smiled at her and Azure gave him a shy smile, fingers curling around Scarlet’s shirt so she wouldn’t fall behind. She felt happy that she could actually be a use to someone.

Scarlet place was huge! And it was the last place she wanted to get lost in.

“Okay, Ibi- san.” Scarlet nodded his head and lead Azure towards his room, where he knows Midnight was waiting for him. They passed by open corridors, Azure could see people out in the courtyard, either playing, lounging or even some are studying under shady tress and by the fish pond.
Everything seemed so serene.

“It’s just a normal place.” Scarlet said sheepishly. There was a hint of red on his cheeks.

“It’s beautiful.” Azure said in awe and even more when the people passing by all greet Scarlet with respect and kindness, some even called him with the honorific of sama.

“I know it will take some time, but I would like you to already consider everything here as a part of you too.”

“I will try.”

Scarlet smiled at her and she smiled back. They continued walking until they reach a room with a fire pattern large on the sliding door. Around the red fire were blue petals and white pearls dancing around it. It was fierce, yet gentle. Azure could see the symbolic of it that represent Scarlet’s room, but she noticed that the blue petals and pearls were rather new compared to the fire.

“Middy, I’m back!”

Scarlet called out as he slid the door open and entered inside. Azure was prepared to meet this ‘Middy’ person, but what she wasn’t prepared for was to stare back into her own eyes.

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On 2017-03-16 06:21:08Show All Posts
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  • Aisetra On 2017-03-15 03:45:25
  • WOOHOO, an update!!! Once again, a beautiful chapter. I love how you're introducing the characters bit by bit and not rushing into the story, leaving room for big development. I can't wait till the next update!
Thank You!
Yes, I'm taking my time with introducing the characters and it makes for quite a lengthy story ;P
The only thing ruining my muse is that word limit here :L
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On 2017-03-16 06:23:55Show All Posts
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  • MisakiFuuji On 2017-03-15 07:20:43
  • I love the backstories, even though they're sad... :'( They make sense too
Argh Ninjas from the Hidden Onion Village are lurking around in the plot forum!! ... wait am I an onion ninja too?
:o:o:o
The next coming chapters will be a bit more cheerful though, slowly but surely, we also get to met our last two favs~ :loveliness:
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On 2017-03-16 06:29:14Show All Posts
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  • silvereagle3870 On 2017-03-15 21:32:49
  • Love it cant wait fo the next chapter.Keep up the GREAT work
Thank You!
Next Chapter will come soon :loveliness:
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