Realistically your 3rd team above is the best layout you currently have.

As for cherry's suggested, I've tried that and it requires a maxed out tayu which no one really bothers with since luck/crit teams have better alternatives in the paywall like gnw1010, pain(most of them), Konan.
Orochimaru isn't bad per say but like kakashi he just likes oozing out early and has been nerfed.