It's alright but if you gonna be going with Sage Naruto on turn 2 you definitely want him move 1. Some improvements would be.

Goose Wood Tactics, so Bee gets resistance, other 3 get ninjutsu.

Bee M clone M clone
*x Naruto N clone
Main Gaara M clone

Passive order Gaara > Naruto > Main > Bee. Gaara only shield 2, so you want him to shield before clones or he will shield them.

3
2 or 3 - both of these are much better then first attack, down to preference.
2
3
1 Talents with Giant Katsuyu.

This gives more combo and dance is better then rasengan on main, why not just reset Narutos rasengan and go again on turn 3, he hits hits harder then wind main and is on move 1.

Ah then it don't matter much i guess, i am used to normal Gaara doing shield before he barrier, also i think i got tactic name wrong on second look, but there is only one that gives Nin + Res so you probably found the right one.

For this build +Life -Attack.

He works even better then normal, but the meta build is with Gakido, Kaze Gara/Gakido/Sage Naruto is most common wind build without super rare ninjas at higher powers, because this builds biggest weakness is Naruto getting controlled turn 1 and Gakido counters that.